Probably a Sick Heart.

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Probably a Sick Heart.

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Teach me how can I mend a broken heart
Teach me how to forget all of your promises
Or were all of your pormises false?
Were they not true?

Facts... Words.. Pictures, People say something that you didn't confess
The confession I needed to hear
The truth that I deserved to know.

Is it fair that I have to find out by myself?
Is it not better If you just be honest with me?
Yes.. sometimes we need to know it by ourselves, but how much painful it is.

Oh , God... Oh, world...I know this is a magic life
But how can I make magic mine
If I feel my magic is lost...faith... love.

How can I mend my broken heart?
How long my heart will be sick? Is there any cure?
I just can't see beyond the truth, beyond what my heart says but what it hurts me.

How I can mend a broken heart...
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Hello Oriani :)
I think that your poem is very beautiful and deep.
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Post by maksoora »

Hi Oriani


Do u know my neke name (maksoor_alkatter)what mean??

arabic name mean(Broken heart).

i like ur poem coz about broken heart

am waitting for new from u

thank u
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Post by Snowy* »

hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:
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Snowy* wrote:hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:
dont worry snowy its just nake.
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Snowy* wrote:hi Oriani
who broke your heart dearling??



also you maksoora who broke your heart??


why everybady have broken heart??
I hope your resones not a man >> :evil: :evil:
'couse that's makeing me crazy.. :twisted: :twisted:
Someone who doesn't (and didn't) deserve my love... You can find a pic of his in the forum.. I don't remember where I posted it. I think at the Confessions topic.
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maksoora wrote:Hi Oriani


Do u know my neke name (maksoor_alkatter)what mean??

arabic name mean(Broken heart).

i like ur poem coz about broken heart

am waitting for new from u

thank u
Oh, I didn't know it, in fact, I just know one of two words in Arabic.
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, I didn't know it, in fact, I just know one of two words in Arabic.[/quote]

if u want i will learn u Arabic ekeke
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I remember it and as I told in your space nice poem,dear.. but not a real matter ,right? :)
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babara wrote:I remember it and as I told in your space nice poem,dear.. but not a real matter ,right? :)
It is, unfortunately :(
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