LOVE is like........what?????

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yali
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LOVE is like........what?????

Post by yali » Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:21 am

Love is like
a life time marathon
goes slowly and steadily

Love is like
a non-stop two-men relay
encourage each other with great patience

Love is like
a hand in hand obstacle race
accelerate power to overcome hindrance

Love is like
our left and right arms
scratch your left with right when it's itch

Love is like
a countless yawn
make relationship alive and kick

Love is like
a soap opera
play your proper roll

Love is like
an endless show
never draw the curtain down

Love is like
a treasure hunt
share triumphant and trophy

Love is
understanding and sympathy
put yourself into each other's shoe

Love is
stressless and doubtless
passion and ........... :D :)

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Post by Krisi » Mon Dec 03, 2007 1:11 am

This is wonderful yali... :)

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Post by yali » Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:50 pm

Krisi
thanks for your support. I composed quite a few, but don't know what titles I'd better make. If I post another one ps make a comment on it so I could imporve it. thank you.

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Post by Krisi » Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:01 pm

yali wrote:Krisi
thanks for your support. I composed quite a few, but don't know what titles I'd better make. If I post another one ps make a comment on it so I could imporve it. thank you.
I would be delighted to do it for you, yali.

For the time being, you can name this poem...

LOVE IS... :P

How's that? :wink:

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Re: LOVE is like........what?????

Post by denvinbo » Thu Jan 03, 2008 2:05 am

I'm listening to the wave of river's sound
I'm listening to the String wind's sound
Listening to the flowers
Loving someone
Flaring up on this world.

I'm listening to my voice
I'm listening...listening
Listening to my heart
Like as walking on the village.

The city tonight is full of stars
The river tonight is full of stars, too
Near your house
The ylang-ylang spreading it perfume immensely
Night fog fly gently.

And I come near her
Sitting next to the river
Together.......
And we love each other....

The city tonight is full of string
The vast love of cloud
Becoming a funny day
Just can't forget the old days
Return to the horizon
My love..........

Do you think it would be?????????

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Re: LOVE is like........what?????

Post by Krisi » Thu Jan 03, 2008 6:23 am

denvinbo wrote:I'm listening to the wave of river's sound
I'm listening to the String wind's sound
Listening to the flowers
Loving someone
Flaring up on this world.

I'm listening to my voice
I'm listening...listening
Listening to my heart
Like as walking on the village.

The city tonight is full of stars
The river tonight is full of stars, too
Near your house
The ylang-ylang spreading it perfume immensely
Night fog fly gently.

And I come near her
Sitting next to the river
Together.......
And we love each other....

The city tonight is full of string
The vast love of cloud
Becoming a funny day
Just can't forget the old days
Return to the horizon
My love..........

Do you think it would be?????????
Nostalgic, denvinbo.

(The trail back to the horizon is almost unclear...
Only wishing that I could still turn back the hands of time.)
esl member since 2007

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Re: LOVE is like........what?????

Post by denvinbo » Tue Jan 08, 2008 10:56 am

I think so................ :D :D :D :D

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