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i need a poem...

Postby Israeli » Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:11 pm

i need a poem that deal with the subject of conflict.

the conflict supposed to be conflict if to hidING pepole/save people from death or don't to take a risk (to endanger oneself).

i will very happy if you can help me to find or write song about it.


please, is very important!!!
thank... and i hope that my request is clear... :D

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Re: i need a poem...

Postby Krisi » Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:58 pm

Israeli wrote:i need a poem that deal with the subject of conflict.

the conflict supposed to be conflict if to hidING pepole/save people from death or don't to take a risk (to endanger oneself).

i will very happy if you can help me to find or write song about it.


please, is very important!!!
thank... and i hope that my request is clear... :D


Here I composed this for you...

I LOVE THEE

I love the tree that sways with the wind,
I love the bird that chirps with a tune,
I love the flower that smiles with the sun,
I love the person that lies within...
Oh, I so love thee...


May I know why do you need it? I could look for more if you want me to... :wink:

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Postby Vega » Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:20 pm

Saving people? Ok, here's the lyrics to a song from Mattafix:

LIVING DARFUR

See the nation through the people's eyes
See the tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh
You shall rise (x2)
There's disaster in your past
Boundaries in your path
What do you desire will lift you higher ?
You don't have to be extraordinary, just forgiving
And those who never heard cries,
You shall rise (x2)
And look forward the skies
Where others fail, you prevail in time
You shall rise

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x3)

Sooner or later we must try ... Living

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

See the nation through the people eye's
See tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh

You shall rise (x4)

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

Sooner or later we must try... LIVING





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Hey Krisi, nice poem.. :D

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Postby Krisi » Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:30 pm

Xkalibur wrote:Saving people? Ok, here's the lyrics to a song from Mattafix:

LIVING DARFUR

See the nation through the people's eyes
See the tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh
You shall rise (x2)
There's disaster in your past
Boundaries in your path
What do you desire will lift you higher ?
You don't have to be extraordinary, just forgiving
And those who never heard cries,
You shall rise (x2)
And look forward the skies
Where others fail, you prevail in time
You shall rise

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x3)

Sooner or later we must try ... Living

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

See the nation through the people eye's
See tears that flow like rivers from the skies
Where it seems there are only borderlines
Where others turn and sigh

You shall rise (x4)

You may never know, if you lay low lay low (x4)

Sooner or later we must try... LIVING





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Hey Krisi, nice poem.. :D


Thank you, Xkalibur. :oops:
(I was worrying so much and made it right away when I saw his post.) :oops:

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Postby Vega » Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:00 pm

krisi wrote:Thank you, Xkalibur. :oops:
(I was worrying so much and made it right away when I saw his post.) :oops:


It's very kind of you helping people, you're not like those rude and ice-hearted girls, you're really WOW. I can only admire you. :wink: ... :P

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Postby Krisi » Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:06 pm

Xkalibur wrote:
krisi wrote:Thank you, Xkalibur. :oops:
(I was worrying so much and made it right away when I saw his post.) :oops:


It's very kind of you helping people, you're not like those rude and ice-hearted girls, you're really WOW. I can only admire you. :wink: ... :P


:oops:

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Postby Israeli » Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:12 pm

thanks... but i don't understand how does is contact to my request... :D

please..

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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 09, 2007 2:19 pm

Israeli wrote:thanks... but i don't understand how does is contact to my request... :D

please..


I don't understand what you mean...it seems you become younger now than (when you posted your initial entry here) 5 days ago...because of the way you express yourself now. :lol:

Sorry.
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Postby Israeli » Sun Dec 09, 2007 6:20 pm

:D

well...


someone can please please please help me?
i realy need it..

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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 09, 2007 9:47 pm

Israeli wrote::D

well...


someone can please please please help me?
i realy need it..


I think it would be better to....

OFFER IT UP! (Someone loves you!)

Goodluck!

-krisi-

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Postby gem » Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:52 pm

Hi Israeli... i hope this can help..i got this from my daughter's book...she got a sort of poem collection...


WHY SPEAK DEATH

Why speak death whose face
You've never seen nor traced
The black velvet of its mantle
The white glow of its skull?

Why speak of death in terms
Of color as if its germ
Were part of your design
Mere mortal in your prime?

Yet it is a thing
Within the gushing spring
In the flowering of dawn which seems
A door to an unknown dream;

Say it lurks in a rosebud
Still untouched by gust
Rich with myths and fragrance
A token of gesture in silence;

Say it yawns in all
That is lovely like eyeball
Drunk and dazzled by life
Or by weariness of strife:

Death is a just a toothless
Child sucking milk from the breast
Of fancy and desire. It lolls
Secure, nameless until you call.


I hope this can help you...if this doesn't fit enough for your requirement.....just tell me i can send another one...

Have a nice day ! :D

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Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:53 am

I'll write your name
To all the stars
And I know in you
That there're many aspiration
'Cause you can't see the sun
When you are standing on the ground

But the ray of hopes
Will never dissolve into nothingness
'Cause I'm near you
To bring your blue
Let's believe in miracle
'Cause tomorrow will never wilt
You and me in a dream
Only us.

Have you ever know that
The sky is full of stars
Have you ever sing loudly
many people 'round you
Do they see the love
That it makes you happy.

Do you know on this world
I'm the one still love you
Bring many hopes
With many things to say
But you'd never know me
If you saw the sun.

Want to be near when you smile
Want to see the wind
Glide past your hair
The singing I wrote for you
Hope you will sing it in future.

The sea of love
Still makes you faraway
Many night
Drizzling rain's sound was gently
Hope the sky help me once
Make you know 'bout my love.

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Postby Krisi » Tue Dec 11, 2007 4:41 am

denvinbo wrote:I'll write your name
To all the stars
And I know in you
That there're many aspiration
'Cause you can't see the sun
When you are standing on the ground

But the ray of hopes
Will never dissolve into nothingness
'Cause I'm near you
To bring your blue
Let's believe in miracle
'Cause tomorrow will never wilt
You and me in a dream
Only us.

Have you ever know that
The sky is full of stars
Have you ever sing loudly
many people 'round you
Do they see the love
That it makes you happy.

Do you know on this world
I'm the one still love you
Bring many hopes
With many things to say
But you'd never know me
If you saw the sun.

Want to be near when you smile
Want to see the wind
Glide past your hair
The singing I wrote for you
Hope you will sing it in future.

The sea of love
Still makes you faraway
Many night
Drizzling rain's sound was gently
Hope the sky help me once
Make you know 'bout my love.


This is lovely and sweet! Did you make this?

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Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:22 pm

Yes. you're right. I made that, 'cause I feel sorry for all the handicap people :cry: .I was thinkin' all the morning and write on this page, so that all the people who have the same love as me can read and experience. :cry:
I also have many other poem. If anyone want to read, I will write for you.

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Postby Krisi » Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:41 pm

denvinbo wrote:Yes. you're right. I made that, 'cause I feel sorry for all the handicap people :cry: .I was thinkin' all the morning and write on this page, so that all the people who have the same love as me can read and experience. :cry:
I also have many other poem. If anyone want to read, I will write for you.


Please do so. Thank you.

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Postby yali » Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:22 pm

Hi Denvinbo
It's really a wonderful and touching poem and I love it. Why not to post more your poems to share with other amateur poets like us or you're a professional poet?? I also like to compose poems but they're often short. Thanks for sharing anyway.

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Postby Israeli » Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:05 am

It's really wonderful poems...but it isn't what i mean...

thanks for trying

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Postby Krisi » Wed Dec 12, 2007 12:56 pm

ohad wrote:למה בדיוק אתה מתכוון, אחי?אולי אני יכול לעזור?
טוב לראות פה עוד מישהו מישראל!



Is this a poem? You might want to share it...

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Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 12, 2007 1:37 pm

Thanks for all the praise :D . I'd like to write the other poem, but I don't have anytime now, so...Could everyone wait for tomorrow :lol: , so that I can write so coherent and interesting :D :lol: :) :P

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Postby Krisi » Wed Dec 12, 2007 2:46 pm

ohad wrote:
krisi wrote:
ohad wrote:למה בדיוק אתה מתכוון, אחי?אולי אני יכול לעזור?
טוב לראות פה עוד מישהו מישראל!



Is this a poem? You might want to share it...

Haha...that's not a poem,just a few words in Hebrew.


:?: :roll: :?:

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Postby Israeli » Wed Dec 12, 2007 4:45 pm

הי!!!
באמת טוב לראות פה עוד מישהו מישראל...(שלא יתעצבנו שאנחנו מדברים בעברית אז רק אני אסביר בקצרה בעברית מה אני צריך...)

אני צריך שיר שיש בו קונפליקט אם להציל אנשים ממוות/ להחביא אותם, אבל בכך לסכן את עצמך(כן, מדובר על חסידי אומות העולם... :D )
ו...רצוי באנגלית
אולי תצליח להסביר להם אתה יותר טוב...

sorry about the hebrew...( maybe he can understand and explain what i look for..)

by the way, from where are you in israel?


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