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Postby Krisi » Thu Dec 13, 2007 3:10 am

Israeli wrote:sorry about the hebrew...( maybe he can understand and explain what i look for..)


I hope you won't be rude next time. Though I'm guilty of this as well... :P Sorry!

Now, this is a song. This is not for you. I think it's for me... :?
I learned about this a few minutes ago! Hope you'll like this. About the tune, I posted it under Music & movies Forum...hope you'll listen to it.

BUTTERFLY

VERSE 1
When you love someone so deeply
They become your life
It's easy to succumb to overwhelming fears inside
Blindly I imagined I could
Keep you under glass
Now I understand to hold you
I must open up my hands
And watch you rise

CHORUS
Spread your wings and prepare to fly
For you have become a butterfly
Fly abandonedly into the sun
If you should return to me
We truly were meant to be
So spread your wings and fly
Butterfly

BRIDGE
I can't pretend this tears
Are over flowing steadily
I can't prevent this hurt from
Almost overtaking me
But I will stand and say Goodbye
For you'll never be mine
Until you know the way it feels to fly

CHORUS
Spread your wings and prepare to fly
For you have become a butterfly
Fly abandonedly into the sun
If you should return to me
We truly were meant to be
So spread your wings and fly
Butterfly
So flutter through the sky
Butterfly
Spread your wings and fly
Butterfly
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Postby Krisi » Thu Dec 13, 2007 7:47 am

I'm very sorry I have to replace the previous post.
Anyway, here's another song...
This will help you look on the brighter side of life...

WHEN YOU BELIEVE - Whitney Houston & Mariah Carey (Live)


Lyrics:
Many nights we prayed
With no proof anyone could hear
In our hearts a hope for a song
We barely understood
Now we are not afraid
Although we know there's much to fear
We were moving mountain
Long before we knew we could, whoa, yes
There can be miracles
When you believe
Though hope is frail
It's hard to feel
Who knows what miracles
You can achieve
When you believe somehow you will
You will when you believe
[mmmmmmmmmyeah]
Mmmyeah
In this time of fear
When prayer so often proves in vain
Hope seems like the summer bird
Too swiftly flown away
Yet now I'm standing here
My hearts so full, I can't explain
Seeking faith and speakin words
I never thought I'd say
There can be miracles
When you believe (when you believe)
Though hope is frail
It's hard to feel (mmm)
Who knows what miracles
You can achieve (you can achieve)
When you believe somehow you will
You will when you believe
[hey]
[ooh]
They don't always happen when you ask
And it's easy to give in to your fears
But when you're blinded by your pain
Can't see the way, get through the rain
A small but still, resilient voice
Says hope is very near, oh [oh]
There can be miracles (miracles)
When you believe (when you believe yeah) [though hope is frail]
Though hope is frail [it's hard]
It's hard to feel (hard to feel, oh, yeah)
Who knows what miracles
You can achieve (you can achieve, oh)
When you believe somehow you will (somehow, somehow, somehow)
Somehow you will (I know, I know, know)
You will when you believe [when you]
(ohoh)
[you will when you]
(you will when you believe)
[oohoohooh]
[oh...oh]
[when you believe]
[when you believe]


-krisi-
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Postby denvinbo » Thu Dec 13, 2007 10:45 am

There's a love story poem I've just composed. I want to show it to everyone :D :
In the old days
When we're children
We often saw the singing of rain
And when the rain
Became more heavier
There was water balloon
Dissolve into the air
Mother said:
It was rain's balloon.

And mother went away forever
In the evening balloon rain
Mother went...
And take the story with her
'Bout the rain and balloon
The story mother has sung
Was old, and old.

Tn that old days
There was a balloon princess
Innocent as the clouds
Singing with the rain freely
Balloon princess
Love the vacant rain boy
Together without taking offense
Although rain sometimes indifferent
Make balloon princess sad
Many times.

Love and love
That's all
Autumn came
And make non-stopping rain
Balloon near rain
Balloon don't feel freezing

But do you know
Balloon princess
Rain is a false man
'Cause rain only love rain
Only and forever.

Do everyone think this is better than the poem before.
If you think it wonderful, you can pm for me.

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Postby denvinbo » Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:59 am

Oh, It's seem to be that nobody online today :cry: .If there's anyone online, read my poem, and experience. :D :)

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Postby Krisi » Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:52 pm

Butterfly-Mariah Carey
Please click :arrow: PLAY THE SONG

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Postby Krisi » Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:59 pm

denvinbo wrote:Oh, It seems that nobody's online today :cry: .If there's anyone online, read my poem, and experience. :D :)


To: denvinbo, I have read your poem don't feel sad. I liked it. A cute poem indeed only it puzzled me a little... (what's the balloon got to do with the rain? Do you mean the raindrops?):P
I know it's a heartbreaking poem, denvinbo...

And...

denvinbo wrote:If you think it's wonderful, you can pm me.

why? :? :roll: :)

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Postby denvinbo » Sat Dec 15, 2007 1:27 am

Hi krisi and everyone, I'd like to have all yours ID yahoo messenger, do you have one? That's all the meaning of the phrase"pm for me" :D :) :lol:

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Postby denvinbo » Sat Dec 15, 2007 1:40 am

Although I didn't compose this poem, I think it's wonderful:

TREE AT MY WINDOW

Tree at my window, window tree,
My sash is lowered when night comes on,
But let there never be curtain drawn
Between you and me.

Vague dream-head lifted out of the ground,
And thing next most diffuse to cloud,
Not all your light tongues talking aloud
Could be profound.

But tree, I have you taken and tossed,
And if you have seen me when I slept,
You have seen me when I was taken and swept
And all but lost.

That day she put our heads together,
Fate had her imagination about her,
Your head so much concerned with outer,
Mine with inner, weather.
:D :) :lol: :twisted:

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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 16, 2007 1:13 am

denvinbo wrote:Although I didn't compose this poem, I think it's wonderful:

TREE AT MY WINDOW

Tree at my window, window tree,
My sash is lowered when night comes on,
But let there never be curtain drawn
Between you and me.

Vague dream-head lifted out of the ground,
And thing next most diffuse to cloud,
Not all your light tongues talking aloud
Could be profound.

But tree, I have you taken and tossed,
And if you have seen me when I slept,
You have seen me when I was taken and swept
And all but lost.

That day she put our heads together,
Fate had her imagination about her,
Your head so much concerned with outer,
Mine with inner, weather.
:D :) :lol: :twisted:


I'm very sorry, I can't understand what this poem wanted to imply. I find no meaning to this and very inconsistent (no specific flow!). We've got different minds shall I say. :oops:

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Postby denvinbo » Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:17 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:Although I didn't compose this poem, I think it's wonderful:

TREE AT MY WINDOW

Tree at my window, window tree,
My sash is lowered when night comes on,
But let there never be curtain drawn
Between you and me.

Vague dream-head lifted out of the ground,
And thing next most diffuse to cloud,
Not all your light tongues talking aloud
Could be profound.

But tree, I have you taken and tossed,
And if you have seen me when I slept,
You have seen me when I was taken and swept
And all but lost.

That day she put our heads together,
Fate had her imagination about her,
Your head so much concerned with outer,
Mine with inner, weather.
:D :) :lol: :twisted:


I'm very sorry, I can't understand what this poem wanted to imply. I find no meaning to this and very inconsistent (no specific flow!). We've got different minds shall I say. :oops:



Do you know Krisi, this poem is meanin' that they love is bright and sweet, like the tree's green :D . They love is strong, like the Tree lives forever. They love each other, like the tree and the sunshine.
So do you know the meaning now, Krisi?

By the time, I'm composing another poem, and I'll write down when I finished. :D :shock: :) :roll:

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Postby denvinbo » Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:19 am

Do you have Yahoo Messenger ID, Krisi? I'd like to hve one :D :lol: :)

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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:22 am

denvinbo wrote:Do you have Yahoo Messenger ID, Krisi? I'd like to hve one :D :lol: :)


:shock:

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Postby denvinbo » Mon Dec 17, 2007 4:31 am

You don't understand. I want to chat with you online to improve our English together. Do you agree with me???? Thanks a lot if you can do that. :D :) :lol: :wink: :| :twisted: :evil: :oops: :P

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Postby Krisi » Mon Dec 17, 2007 6:17 am

denvinbo wrote:You don't understand. I want to chat with you online to improve our English together. Do you agree with me???? Thanks a lot if you can do that. :D :) :lol: :wink: :| :twisted: :evil: :oops: :P


Is there anything wrong if we exchange our opinions here? :roll:

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Postby denvinbo » Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:50 am

I didn't mean that, Krisi. You've thought in a wrong way of what I want we to do.
Because, in the forum, we can't talk directly together, so that I've thought that could we chat together, so that we can improve our English, 'bout Speaking, Writing, and Reading. Do you understand now????.........(hey, are you shy to give other person your nickname :roll: :( :x )

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Re: i need a poem...

Postby Krisi » Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:18 pm

denvinbo wrote:hey, are you shy to give other person your nickname :roll: :( :x )


What made you say this? It's not that I'm shy, I just want privacy!

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Re: i need a poem...

Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 18, 2007 10:43 am

uh huh i'm very sorry, but .... your privacy make me think of you by the other way!!!111 :| :| :| :| :cry: :shock: :shock:

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Re: i need a poem...

Postby Krisi » Tue Dec 18, 2007 11:48 am

denvinbo wrote:uh huh i'm very sorry, but .... your privacy make me think of you by the other way!!!111 :| :| :| :| :cry: :shock: :shock:


What other way? What do you mean?  :? (I'm not joking! you're becoming rude...)... careful of your words please. I don't know who you are so please observe your manners ...I'm so sorry to say this, but with your kind of character, I would not regret not giving you my YM ID even if I have no one to talk to. (It's virtually the same as, hitting my head with a stone, if I give you my YM!)

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Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 19, 2007 10:49 am

Ok. I have no other commands :shock: :| :|

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Re: i need a poem...

Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 19, 2007 11:16 am

I'm listening to the wave of river's sound
I'm listening to the String wind's sound
Listen to the flowers
Love someone
Flare up on this world.

I'm listening to my voice
I'm listening...listening
Listen to my heart
Like as walking on the village.

The city tonight is full of stars
The river tonight is full of stars, too
Near your house
The ylang-ylang spread it perfume immensely
Night fog fly gently.

The city tonight is full of string
The vast love of cloud
Become a funny day
Just can't forget the old days
Return to the horizon
My city..........

:?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: what do you think 'bout this one?????


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