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Postby denvinbo » Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:17 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:Although I didn't compose this poem, I think it's wonderful:

TREE AT MY WINDOW

Tree at my window, window tree,
My sash is lowered when night comes on,
But let there never be curtain drawn
Between you and me.

Vague dream-head lifted out of the ground,
And thing next most diffuse to cloud,
Not all your light tongues talking aloud
Could be profound.

But tree, I have you taken and tossed,
And if you have seen me when I slept,
You have seen me when I was taken and swept
And all but lost.

That day she put our heads together,
Fate had her imagination about her,
Your head so much concerned with outer,
Mine with inner, weather.
:D :) :lol: :twisted:


I'm very sorry, I can't understand what this poem wanted to imply. I find no meaning to this and very inconsistent (no specific flow!). We've got different minds shall I say. :oops:



Do you know Krisi, this poem is meanin' that they love is bright and sweet, like the tree's green :D . They love is strong, like the Tree lives forever. They love each other, like the tree and the sunshine.
So do you know the meaning now, Krisi?

By the time, I'm composing another poem, and I'll write down when I finished. :D :shock: :) :roll:

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Postby denvinbo » Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:19 am

Do you have Yahoo Messenger ID, Krisi? I'd like to hve one :D :lol: :)

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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:22 am

denvinbo wrote:Do you have Yahoo Messenger ID, Krisi? I'd like to hve one :D :lol: :)


:shock:

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Postby denvinbo » Mon Dec 17, 2007 4:31 am

You don't understand. I want to chat with you online to improve our English together. Do you agree with me???? Thanks a lot if you can do that. :D :) :lol: :wink: :| :twisted: :evil: :oops: :P

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Postby Krisi » Mon Dec 17, 2007 6:17 am

denvinbo wrote:You don't understand. I want to chat with you online to improve our English together. Do you agree with me???? Thanks a lot if you can do that. :D :) :lol: :wink: :| :twisted: :evil: :oops: :P


Is there anything wrong if we exchange our opinions here? :roll:

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Postby denvinbo » Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:50 am

I didn't mean that, Krisi. You've thought in a wrong way of what I want we to do.
Because, in the forum, we can't talk directly together, so that I've thought that could we chat together, so that we can improve our English, 'bout Speaking, Writing, and Reading. Do you understand now????.........(hey, are you shy to give other person your nickname :roll: :( :x )

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Postby Krisi » Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:18 pm

denvinbo wrote:hey, are you shy to give other person your nickname :roll: :( :x )


What made you say this? It's not that I'm shy, I just want privacy!

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Postby denvinbo » Tue Dec 18, 2007 10:43 am

uh huh i'm very sorry, but .... your privacy make me think of you by the other way!!!111 :| :| :| :| :cry: :shock: :shock:

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Postby Krisi » Tue Dec 18, 2007 11:48 am

denvinbo wrote:uh huh i'm very sorry, but .... your privacy make me think of you by the other way!!!111 :| :| :| :| :cry: :shock: :shock:


What other way? What do you mean?  :? (I'm not joking! you're becoming rude...)... careful of your words please. I don't know who you are so please observe your manners ...I'm so sorry to say this, but with your kind of character, I would not regret not giving you my YM ID even if I have no one to talk to. (It's virtually the same as, hitting my head with a stone, if I give you my YM!)

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Re: i need a poem...

Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 19, 2007 10:49 am

Ok. I have no other commands :shock: :| :|

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Re: i need a poem...

Postby denvinbo » Wed Dec 19, 2007 11:16 am

I'm listening to the wave of river's sound
I'm listening to the String wind's sound
Listen to the flowers
Love someone
Flare up on this world.

I'm listening to my voice
I'm listening...listening
Listen to my heart
Like as walking on the village.

The city tonight is full of stars
The river tonight is full of stars, too
Near your house
The ylang-ylang spread it perfume immensely
Night fog fly gently.

The city tonight is full of string
The vast love of cloud
Become a funny day
Just can't forget the old days
Return to the horizon
My city..........

:?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: what do you think 'bout this one?????


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