sangvu wrote:Hi everybody, i'm new and hope to make friend with all of you. Please fix this essay for me if i had any mistakes in it.Thanks you very much.
English is very important because it help you so many things in (whose)life. So i attended an English class at night three days a week. The teacher gave us many useful activities and i loved it. We watched a(you watched a film or many films) video about the Britain family life. It's(in an essay, people don't abbreviate) very interesting but i found it very difficult(to do something) because they spoke too fast to understand most of it. I thought we should have watched the video in a short pieces and went back and watched it again until we understood the main points. The second thing we had to do was went outside and talked with people in the street. It's quite exciting but we felt embarrassed about speaking. Actually we didn't have enough(question is not enough==>use many is better) question to ask them and we should have prepared it at home and practiced them before went out. After the course we had a test. It checked how understanding we were in the course. Although this test was very difficult but it was(lost to be) very useful after each course. We didn't have enough guidance from the teacher during the test and we needed more guidance from him(don't repeat the same words in a sentence). The test allowed us to know our strongness and weakeness(what are these 2 words mean, they have wrong grammar). So i fonded of doing the test(if you use present simple for this sentence, it will digress).
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