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sangvu
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by sangvu » Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:16 am
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cosmo
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by cosmo » Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:09 pm
Dear Friend
I could not do correction on your mail so i will send you a new mail with correction
bye
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denvinbo
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by denvinbo » Tue Feb 05, 2008 9:54 am
sangvu wrote:Hi everybody, i'm new and hope to make friend with all of you. Please fix this essay for me if i had any mistakes in it.Thanks you very much.
English is very important because it help you so many thing
s in (
whose)life. So i attended
an English class at night three day
s a week. The teacher gave us many useful activities and i loved it. We watched
a(you watched a film or many films) video about the
Britain family life. It
's(
in an essay, people don't abbreviate) very interesting but i found it very difficult(
to do something) because they spoke too fast to understand most of it. I
thought we should
have watched the video in
a short pieces and
went back and watched it again until we understood the main points. The second thing we ha
d to do
was went outside and talked with people in the street. It
's quite exciting but we felt embarrassed about speaking. Actually we didn't have
enough(
question is not enough==>use many is better) question to ask them and we should
have prepared it at home and practi
ced them before went out. After the cou
rse we had a test. It check
ed how understanding we
were in the cou
rse. Although this test
was very difficult but it
was(lost
to be) very useful after each cou
rse. We didn't have enough guidance from the teacher during the test and we needed more guidance from
him(don't repeat the same words in a sentence). The test allowed us to know our
strongness and weakeness(
what are these 2 words mean, they have wrong grammar). So i fonded of doing the test(
if you use present simple for this sentence, it will digress).

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Why did you use past simple above and present simple below??? Is there any suitable about grammar of this paragraph??
If you let me know the grammar you have used for this paragraph, I will let you know more about your mistakes......
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shakespear
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by shakespear » Mon Feb 11, 2008 8:25 am
YOUR EXPRESSION IS GOOD BUT YOU HAVE SOME MISTAKES IN GRAMMAR . GOOD LUKE .
our life is like a night mare
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shakespear
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by shakespear » Mon Feb 11, 2008 8:29 am
YOUR EXPRESSION IS GOOD BUT YOU HAVE SOME MISTAKES IN GRAMMAR . GOOD LUKE .
our life is like a night mare
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by denvinbo » Mon Feb 11, 2008 11:21 am
2 times, shakespear...........
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by shakespear » Tue Feb 12, 2008 9:26 am
denvinbo trust me I don`t know how it happened .thanks a lot .
our life is like a night mare
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by denvinbo » Tue Feb 12, 2008 10:28 am
:)
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by shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 10:49 am
dear denvinbo I`d like to thank you :) :) :)

our life is like a night mare
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by denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:04 am
You are too ceremonious.............. :)