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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:16 am
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English is very important because it help you so many thing in life. So i attended English class at night three day a week. The teacher gave us many useful activities and i loved it. We watched a video about the britain family life. It's very interesting but i found it very difficult because they spoke too fast to understand most of it. I think we should watch the video in the short pieces and go back and watch it again until we understand the main points. The second thing we have to do is going outside and talking with people in the street. It's quite exciting but we felt embarrassed about speaking. Actually we didn't have enough question to ask them and we should prepare it at home and practise them before going out. After the cousre we had a test. It will check how understanding we are in the cousre. Although this test is very difficult but it very useful after each cousre. We didn't have enough guidance from the teacher during the test and we need more guidance from the teacher. The test allow us to know our strongness and weakeness. So i fond of doing the test.
English is very important because it help you so many thing in life. So i attended English class at night three day a week. The teacher gave us many useful activities and i loved it. We watched a video about the britain family life. It's very interesting but i found it very difficult because they spoke too fast to understand most of it. I think we should watch the video in the short pieces and go back and watch it again until we understand the main points. The second thing we have to do is going outside and talking with people in the street. It's quite exciting but we felt embarrassed about speaking. Actually we didn't have enough question to ask them and we should prepare it at home and practise them before going out. After the cousre we had a test. It will check how understanding we are in the cousre. Although this test is very difficult but it very useful after each cousre. We didn't have enough guidance from the teacher during the test and we need more guidance from the teacher. The test allow us to know our strongness and weakeness. So i fond of doing the test.