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Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
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Hi everone . denvinbo can read my thoughts .
our life is like a night mare
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Hi . We have to write what feel ,haven`t we?
our life is like a night mare
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Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
Bye
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Krisi wrote:Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
once kirisi said that.
i think we must from time to time remove our hearts from sadness.
i think so
maybe i am wrong but i feel we`d all better do
good luck
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hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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suffering from woman again
we have to live our life freely
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sorry
i didn't see this comment
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lovepoetry wrote:find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org
thanx 4 this site
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hi
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hmm are u talking about a person who was indifferent with u?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?
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crocodile Tears ....written by me


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly
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http://www.learnenglishabc.org

i ddn;t see this site
dd anyone see this site
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shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

i wrote it in the college....i show it to my teacher, he praised me for writing it
our life is like a night mare
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