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poem

Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 2:02 pm
by shakespear
crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:52 am
by denvinbo
Where's it from??

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 6:00 am
by shakespear
THIS POEM IS MINE AND I PRODUCE IT. DON`T BE AMAZED.

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 8:15 am
by Bambang
shakespear wrote:THIS POEM IS MINE AND I PRODUCE IT. DON`T BE AMAZED.
Beautifully written!

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 12:23 pm
by denvinbo
Good....Better than I used to be.....

Re: poem

Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 9:25 am
by shakespear
denvinbo ,MY FRIEND ,WHY DO YOU SAY THAT ? AREN`T YOU USED TO READ LIKE THIS ? BE OVER THIS LEVEL ; THNKS A LOT.

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:18 am
by shakespear
hi my friends I want to thank you and hope to meet in future . Bye

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:03 am
by Vega
Hi there. I like your poem. :wink:

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:30 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

This poems are sad.
I admire people who can write effectively but just wondering do you feel what you write?
You've got a thread of poems here and they are all sad... Why? :roll:

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:35 am
by denvinbo
That is his state of mind..........

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:54 am
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:That is his state of mind..........
Hi denvinbo,
Yes, I know that. But is it wrong to know? Do you really think it's nice to think in this way?

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:38 am
by denvinbo
I think he is missing someone........

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:39 am
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:I think he is missing someone........
How'd you think of that? Don' make a story here. :)
You're not him, are you? :P

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:43 am
by denvinbo
I haven't make any story yet............... :)

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:51 pm
by Krisi
Denvinbo, a single word could possess a lot of different meanings, to plenty of people with different culture. :)
A word may not or could mean too much to me but this is not applicable to all because we really think in different ways. :)

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:57 pm
by shakespear
krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:04 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
Thanks.
Maybe I have got no more feelings because I couldn't write anymore. :)

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:24 pm
by Bambang
shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:44 pm
by sweets
i like this poem it's sensitive one

Re: poem

Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:32 am
by Krisi
bambang wrote:
shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D
Thanks Uncle B. I'll remember this for the rest of my life. :)

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:51 am
by shakespear
Thank you all of you .Xkalibur my friend I want to thank you too and good luck .

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:04 am
by Krisi
Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P

Re: poem

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 7:11 am
by lovepoetry

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:33 am
by shakespear
Hi everone . denvinbo can read my thoughts .

Re: poem

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:22 am
by shakespear
Hi . We have to write what feel ,haven`t we?

Re: poem

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:36 am
by shakespear
Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
Bye

Re: poem

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:52 pm
by shakespear
Krisi wrote:Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
once kirisi said that.
i think we must from time to time remove our hearts from sadness.
i think so
maybe i am wrong but i feel we`d all better do
good luck

Re: poem

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:08 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:03 am
by farah
suffering from woman again

Re: poem

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:12 pm
by shakespear
sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

Re: poem

Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:13 pm
by shakespear
lovepoetry wrote:find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org
thanx 4 this site
have nice moments

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:51 am
by shakespear
hi

Re: poem

Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:04 am
by Lara
hmm are u talking about a person who was indifferent with u?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?

Re: poem

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:21 am
by shakespear
crocodile Tears ....written by me


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly

Re: poem

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:23 am
by shakespear
http://www.learnenglishabc.org

i ddn;t see this site
dd anyone see this site

Re: poem

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:22 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

i wrote it in the college....i show it to my teacher, he praised me for writing it