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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:54 am

denvinbo wrote:That is his state of mind..........


Hi denvinbo,
Yes, I know that. But is it wrong to know? Do you really think it's nice to think in this way?
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Re: poem

Postby denvinbo » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:38 am

I think he is missing someone........
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:39 am

denvinbo wrote:I think he is missing someone........


How'd you think of that? Don' make a story here. :)
You're not him, are you? :P
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Re: poem

Postby denvinbo » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:43 am

I haven't make any story yet............... :)
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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:51 pm

Denvinbo, a single word could possess a lot of different meanings, to plenty of people with different culture. :)
A word may not or could mean too much to me but this is not applicable to all because we really think in different ways. :)
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:57 pm

krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
our life is like a night mare

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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:04 pm

shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks


Thanks.
Maybe I have got no more feelings because I couldn't write anymore. :)
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Re: poem

Postby Bambang » Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:24 pm

shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks


Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D
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Re: poem

Postby sweets » Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:44 pm

i like this poem it's sensitive one
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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:32 am

bambang wrote:
shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks


Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D


Thanks Uncle B. I'll remember this for the rest of my life. :)
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:51 am

Thank you all of you .Xkalibur my friend I want to thank you too and good luck .
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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:04 am

Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:33 am

Hi everone . denvinbo can read my thoughts .
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:22 am

Hi . We have to write what feel ,haven`t we?
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:36 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:52 pm

Krisi wrote:Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P

once kirisi said that.
i think we must from time to time remove our hearts from sadness.
i think so
maybe i am wrong but i feel we`d all better do
good luck
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:08 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: poem

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:03 am

suffering from woman again
we have to live our life freely

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:12 pm

sorry
i didn't see this comment
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:13 pm

lovepoetry wrote:find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org

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