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Re: poem
Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:04 am
by Krisi
Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
Re: poem
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 7:11 am
by lovepoetry
Re: poem
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:33 am
by shakespear
Hi everone . denvinbo can read my thoughts .
Re: poem
Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:22 am
by shakespear
Hi . We have to write what feel ,haven`t we?
Re: poem
Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:36 am
by shakespear
Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
Bye
Re: poem
Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:52 pm
by shakespear
Krisi wrote:Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
once kirisi said that.
i think we must from time to time remove our hearts from sadness.
i think so
maybe i am wrong but i feel we`d all better do
good luck
Re: poem
Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:08 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck
Re: poem
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:03 am
by farah
suffering from woman again
Re: poem
Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:12 pm
by shakespear
sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
Re: poem
Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:13 pm
by shakespear
thanx 4 this site
have nice moments
Re: poem
Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:51 am
by shakespear
hi
Re: poem
Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:04 am
by Lara
hmm are u talking about a person who was indifferent with u?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?
Re: poem
Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:21 am
by shakespear
crocodile Tears ....written by me
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly
Re: poem
Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:23 am
by shakespear
http://www.learnenglishabc.org
i ddn;t see this site
dd anyone see this site
Re: poem
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:22 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
i wrote it in the college....i show it to my teacher, he praised me for writing it