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Postby Vega » Tue Feb 12, 2008 7:26 pm

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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Postby mybikiny » Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:22 am

Fantastic poem, it made me cry :oops:

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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:06 am

fantastic poem,words and idea .Good luck and god bless you .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Postby Krisi » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:12 pm

Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...

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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Postby Vega » Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:04 am

Thanks everybody for your comments!

krisi wrote:Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...


How sure you are that things weren't as I write, but true as you say? :P To you, I presume, poems should be objective, correct from the point of circumstances. Where the creativity then? :?

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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Postby shakespear » Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:12 am

we are who must thank you .
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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Postby Snowy* » Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:01 am

It's really beautiful poem
It's full of Emotions

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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Postby Sunnypk » Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:43 am

woww it's written really marvelour Xkalibur brother as usual I call you . :)

keep it up
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