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poem

Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 7:26 pm
by Vega
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Re: to woman that broke my heart

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:22 am
by mybikiny
Fantastic poem, it made me cry :oops:

Re: to woman that broke my heart

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:06 am
by shakespear
fantastic poem,words and idea .Good luck and god bless you .

Re: to woman that broke my heart

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:12 pm
by Krisi
Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...

Re: to woman that broke my heart

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:04 am
by Vega
Thanks everybody for your comments!
krisi wrote:Why? Xkalibur, what motivated you to make this sad poem? (I thought our brother won't fall in love)
How sure are you that the woman broke your heart? it could be vice versa...or probably both of you could be hurting each other...
How sure you are that things weren't as I write, but true as you say? :P To you, I presume, poems should be objective, correct from the point of circumstances. Where the creativity then? :?

Re: to woman that broke my heart

Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:12 am
by shakespear
we are who must thank you .

Re: to woman that broke my heart

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:01 am
by Snowy*
It's really beautiful poem
It's full of Emotions

Re: to woman that broke my heart

Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:43 am
by Sunnypk
woww it's written really marvelour Xkalibur brother as usual I call you . :)

keep it up