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SOUL SELLER
Truly, I gained gold?
For my soul I sold
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
As you possess wealth
What is –then- health
Let me live my day
Every second I feel gay
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
I feel the world is mine
And for my sake sun will shine
Hard I sold my past
From him I run very fast
Go soul, go past, go torture
Quickly, I'll travel into future
Bye, bye poverty for ever
I won't return, never..never
our life is like a night mare
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Uhm.....a bit scare..........there's something deep in your poem........... :)
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:shock: what a style!!! :shock: (horror)
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Hi evereyone.There is no herror in my poem . Thanks .
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Thanks a lot to everyone and good luck . :) :) :) :)
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Hi Krisi,
Krisi wrote::shock: what a style!!! :shock: (horror)
I want to know your opinion about my poems . Good luck.
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Hi krisi
Really I miss ur nice comments
Bye
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hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
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hi
it's a new style i really like this style i could not find words how my feeling are now maybe when i read it deeply i can tell

well about ur question"why do we forget to read or to write"

for me my writes comes when i can not stand situations around me so i write as a way to relax but when i read it againe i discover that i did not talk about the feeling i really live in

about reading i always forget what i read that made a diffecult in my study but i beleive that the thing that u read and love it form depth of ur heart hard to be forgeted

i hope that i answered ur question

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hi sweet
i think u relax my sadnees or at least some of them
thnx
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hi
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we always turn our head towards the past but it doesn`t come back to us .it runs as fast as a train.
let`s live our happy days
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hi everyone and goodluck
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hi
i think its good
we have to live our life freely
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sorry
i didn't see this comment
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You are amazing Shakespear. This name really suits you. I am really impressed. Also i need your help to become a good writer.
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hello friend
u r welcome and i'm ready to help u its my pleasure to help my friends
thnx 4 ur comments
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hi Aimee
where r u ?
i'm waiting 4 u... u didn't contact me really i like to help each other
c u
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all my poems r pieces of my memories.autobiography so all of them i like
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Yes shakespear, when we wanna leave all our bad memories, it's so difficult, but to do it we must rid ourselves of everything that affects us and let them go, and start again!
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soul seller doesn't care 4 the hell so he sells his soul to the satan...he hates his poverty ..past he just like gold and richness...money
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that's on the earth, but waht about in hell? would he be happy in hell?
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he doesn't care 4 hell and the hereafter, he just cares 4 gold in this passing life...
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shakespear wrote:SOUL SELLER
Truly, I gained gold?
For my soul I sold
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
As you possess wealth
What is –then- health
Let me live my day
Every second I feel gay
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
I feel the world is mine
And for my sake sun will shine
Hard I sold my past
From him I run very fast
Go soul, go past, go torture
Quickly, I'll travel into future
Bye, bye poverty for ever
I won't return, never..never
i wrote this poem in college during my study
our life is like a night mare
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