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Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:10 am

SOUL SELLER
Truly, I gained gold?
For my soul I sold
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
As you possess wealth
What is –then- health
Let me live my day
Every second I feel gay
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
I feel the world is mine
And for my sake sun will shine
Hard I sold my past
From him I run very fast
Go soul, go past, go torture
Quickly, I'll travel into future
Bye, bye poverty for ever
I won't return, never..never
our life is like a night mare

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Post by denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:12 am

Uhm.....a bit scare..........there's something deep in your poem........... :)

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Post by Krisi » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:09 pm

:shock: what a style!!! :shock: (horror)
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Post by shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:48 am

Hi evereyone.There is no herror in my poem . Thanks .
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Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:49 am

Thanks a lot to everyone and good luck . :) :) :) :)
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Post by shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:25 am

Hi Krisi,
Krisi wrote::shock: what a style!!! :shock: (horror)
I want to know your opinion about my poems . Good luck.
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Post by shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:34 am

Hi krisi
Really I miss ur nice comments
Bye
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Post by shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:38 am

hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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Post by sweets » Wed Jun 25, 2008 5:21 pm

hi
it's a new style i really like this style i could not find words how my feeling are now maybe when i read it deeply i can tell

well about ur question"why do we forget to read or to write"

for me my writes comes when i can not stand situations around me so i write as a way to relax but when i read it againe i discover that i did not talk about the feeling i really live in

about reading i always forget what i read that made a diffecult in my study but i beleive that the thing that u read and love it form depth of ur heart hard to be forgeted

i hope that i answered ur question

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Post by shakespear » Thu Jun 26, 2008 5:07 am

hi sweet
i think u relax my sadnees or at least some of them
thnx
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