my First poem

[ladymae]

For my little sister...

Honey bee Isabella

You are so tiny like a white daisy in the field

Mom and Dad so proud of you...

The day when you was born

All angles and wood fairy sing sweet song for you

la la la la la....la la la la la

The rainbow across from the clear blue sky

to give you a wish

bab bo da be bo da bo

so sleep tight in sweet nice

and wake up with the first sun shines

I am still here

waiting your little smile from your lips

And the first time I hold you in my arms

I know you are a treasure of their life

Remember me honey

Remember me

I am a Lady who loves you

.......


By Ladymae

[Vega]

Congratulations with your First poem! Hope you will compose more poems in the future! :)

[ladymae]

Thank you so much

[denvinbo]

Well done....It's not bad for the first time..............

[shakespear]

Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips

And the first time I hold you in my arms " .Good luck my friend .

[shakespear]

Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips

And the first time I hold you in my arms "

[Krisi]

Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips

And the first time I hold you in my arms "

hahahahaha So, our brother Shakespear here has changed his feelings...Good! :) Just don't forget Babara, OK! :P

[shakespear]

Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips

And the first time I hold you in my arms " .Good luck my friend .

[sweets]

it's very good as first peom

[denvinbo]

You posted 3 times, shakespear.............

[Sunnypk]

it's nice :)
keep it up!

[Annaa]

Very nice