Feelings

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Sunnypk
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Feelings

Post by Sunnypk » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:45 am

FEELINGS


But often, I have seen
The moon of fourteen
But on that glorious night
There was a different sight
In white bridal suit
The moon was striking cube

There was a star near the moon
I decided to ask it soon
What was so special now?
It glanced at me and said
Every thing is the same my dear.
But listen, if you wish hear
Something has touched you
If you are sad, everything is sad.
If you are glad, the world is glad.


(Sunnypk)
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Re: Feelings

Post by shakespear » Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:04 am

Hi my friends .this poem is good .Go on !!!.Good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Feelings

Post by Sunnypk » Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:30 am

shakespear wrote:Hi my friends .this poem is good .Go on !!!.Good luck .

thanks shakespear this was my first attempt but my next coming thread will be very good.
thanks for replying and liking.
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