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SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

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SOUL & NIGHT
World was sinking in dark
Calmness was spread in everywhere
Everything was quite quiet
Even stars sank in deep sleep
Winds were motionless
Trees were like statues
As they, too, were quiet
Suddenly I felt her, coming towards me
Hard, I could touch her
So I traveled so far
To the far place where the ease was
I settled there for ever more
And forgot, but her, the whole
My soul swam in heights
Flew, like birds, in the sky
And hold her tightly
Without any feelings .


THANKS ALOT
our life is like a night mare
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Good..... :)
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it's nice
you are written very effective poem I like it
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thanks a lot all of you . :)
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Thanks a lot to everyone who encourages me and good luck ,
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Hi . Our life is short,so why we don`t enjoy our selves.
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hi you are a good writer and i encourage you to continue writing and i am waiting for you next poem
good luck :P
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thank u
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u really engourage me
good luck
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hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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hi
every one always needs to be encouraged, don`t u think?
c u soon good luck
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hi everyone and goodluck
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speaking frankly
i think its rather artificial ,unnatural.
sorry but its my point of view.
we have to live our life freely
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hello and thnx
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shakespear wrote:SOUL & NIGHT
World was sinking in dark
Calmness was spread in everywhere
Everything was quite quiet
Even stars sank in deep sleep
Winds were motionless
Trees were like statues
As they, too, were quiet
Suddenly I felt her, coming towards me
Hard, I could touch her
So I traveled so far
To the far place where the ease was
I settled there for ever more
And forgot, but her, the whole
My soul swam in heights
Flew, like birds, in the sky
And hold her tightly
Without any feelings .
i remember the time of writing.....and the situation
our life is like a night mare
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