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Little hope

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:15 am
by shakespear
Little hope
She occupied my memory
And left me with sorrow alone
I can't forget her features
I called her in please tone
"Can you let me with you?
I want to be your own
What happened for our love?
Your heart is like a stone
Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
She replied no answer
My sorrow has grown
And she made one gesture
I wished to hear a phone
Her gesture meant speech
"That she didn't care for moan

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 2:03 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote: Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
:) Were you fat before? :P

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 8:16 am
by Ms.A.Z
beautiful :wink:

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 9:54 am
by sweets
every single word enter my heart smoothly i really congratulate u of word choosen

i do not know why ur writes carries the idea of separtion and weakness due to this love :|


cheeeeers

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:22 pm
by Krisi
sweets wrote:every single word enter my heart smoothly i really congratulate u of word choosen

i do not know why ur writes carries the idea of separtion and weakness due to this love :|


cheeeeers
Yes, sweets you got what I mean...I'm also wondering. :roll:

But,

Shakespear were you fat before? :P

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 9:54 am
by shakespear
Hi everyone .
krisi,thanks . I wasn`t fat before ."skin and bone " metaphore .
Sweet thanks a lot .Where are you from ?
Ms.A.z thanks and good luck .

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:48 pm
by Krisi
Krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote: Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
:) Were you fat before? :P
shakespear wrote: ...I wasn't fat before. "skin and bone" metaphor.
hmm, metaphor... :P

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 4:10 pm
by sweets
hello
well iam talking now while the f16 is shooting somewhere :(

so did u know where iam from :?: :?: :?:

i think u get it

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:31 am
by shakespear
Hi sweet , I think you `re from Lebanon , Aren`t you ?

Re: Little hope

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:42 pm
by sweets
well
ur guess is totally wrong :(
iam form Palestine

see u

Re: Little hope

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:17 am
by shakespear
Hi sweet .Trust me ,I u r from palestine after I sent u the massege. Good luck.

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:03 am
by Krisi
:shock:

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:08 am
by Sunnypk
Very nice dear

Keep it up! :)

Re: Little hope

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:56 am
by shakespear
hi sweet . u r really brave people, and I can see ray of hope in the horizon.Good luck.

Re: Little hope

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:28 am
by shakespear
Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 2:22 pm
by loola
I like ur lines thanks dear..

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 9:32 am
by shakespear
I want to here about u

Re: Little hope

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 3:13 am
by allison
shakespear wrote:Little hope
She occupied my memory
And left me with sorrow alone
I can't forget her features
I called her in please tone
"Can you let me with you?
I want to be your own
What happened for our love?
Your heart is like a stone
Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
She replied no answer
My sorrow has grown
And she made one gesture
I wished to hear a phone
Her gesture meant speech
"That she didn't care for moan

Every pain I take creates a little piece of my life.

I fell, stand and gathered the fragments of my broken self. Piece by piece I put them together but never to feel the same person I once was...

Re: Little hope

Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:34 am
by allison
The pain I bear, the tears I shed
is the sad song of my wounded heart.

Re: Little hope

Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:06 pm
by shakespear
Hi allison
By ur 2 letters u make e crying & weeping .
Ur words r sad.
go ahead.
goodluck & c u later

Re: Little hope

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:57 am
by shakespear
hi every one
I can see ray of hope in the horizon.
have nice times
good luck

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:21 am
by farah
hi
holla
its gd poem

Re: Little hope

Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:27 am
by Lara
She didnt care about ur feelings; but at the end did u see a glimmer of hope??

Re: Little hope

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:35 am
by shakespear
Lara wrote:She didnt care about ur feelings; but at the end did u see a glimmer of hope??
lovely comment
thnx

Re: Little hope

Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:30 am
by allison
shakespear wrote:Hi allison
By ur 2 letters u make e crying & weeping .
Ur words r sad.
go ahead.
goodluck & c u later
---------
I think words that really came from the writers heart can be felt by the reader...
Thanks for your remark Shakespear.
allison

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:44 pm
by shakespear
hi friend...u r welcome and u r r8...words that come from inside the heart enter easily to the hearts...good luck

Re: Little hope

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:12 am
by shakespear
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