Little hope

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:17 am

Hi sweet .Trust me ,I u r from palestine after I sent u the massege. Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:03 am

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Re: Little hope

Postby Sunnypk » Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:08 am

Very nice dear

Keep it up! :)
As you so, so shall you reap

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:56 am

hi sweet . u r really brave people, and I can see ray of hope in the horizon.Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:28 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby loola » Fri May 23, 2008 2:22 pm

I like ur lines thanks dear..

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Sat May 24, 2008 9:32 am

I want to here about u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby allison » Thu May 29, 2008 3:13 am

shakespear wrote:Little hope
She occupied my memory
And left me with sorrow alone
I can't forget her features
I called her in please tone
"Can you let me with you?
I want to be your own
What happened for our love?
Your heart is like a stone
Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
She replied no answer
My sorrow has grown
And she made one gesture
I wished to hear a phone
Her gesture meant speech
"That she didn't care for moan



Every pain I take creates a little piece of my life.

I fell, stand and gathered the fragments of my broken self. Piece by piece I put them together but never to feel the same person I once was...
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]

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Re: Little hope

Postby allison » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:34 am

The pain I bear, the tears I shed
is the sad song of my wounded heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:06 pm

Hi allison
By ur 2 letters u make e crying & weeping .
Ur words r sad.
go ahead.
goodluck & c u later
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:57 am

hi every one
I can see ray of hope in the horizon.
have nice times
good luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:21 am

hi
holla
its gd poem
we have to live our life freely

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Re: Little hope

Postby Lara » Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:27 am

She didnt care about ur feelings; but at the end did u see a glimmer of hope??

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:35 am

Lara wrote:She didnt care about ur feelings; but at the end did u see a glimmer of hope??


lovely comment
thnx

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Re: Little hope

Postby allison » Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:30 am

shakespear wrote:Hi allison
By ur 2 letters u make e crying & weeping .
Ur words r sad.
go ahead.
goodluck & c u later


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I think words that really came from the writers heart can be felt by the reader...
Thanks for your remark Shakespear.
allison

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:44 pm

hi friend...u r welcome and u r r8...words that come from inside the heart enter easily to the hearts...good luck


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