Repentant Soul
The striking pain-
who's to blame?
This worldly creatures praise.
The precious tears
just run like hell
'Twas caused by the disgrace.
While some endure
their future secure,
You fall in disbelief
how yours gave way-
in a flutter destroyed
now you dwindle in dismay.
Ephemeral is the world,
Eternal is the faith-
It is but unfortunate
that you,creature,
realised it too late.
repentant soul
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Re: repentant soul
Nice TearHear! I like it. :)TearHere wrote:Repentant Soul
The striking pain-
who's to blame?
This worldly creatures praise.
The precious tears
just run like hell
'Twas caused by the disgrace.
While some endure
their future secure,
You fall in disbelief
how yours gave way-
in a flutter destroyed
now you dwindle in dismay.
Ephemeral is the world,
Eternal is the faith-
It is but unfortunate
that you,creature,
realised it too late.
Please go on writing...
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Re: repentant soul
Thanks alot!. :D ..Krisi wrote:Nice TearHear! I like it. :)
Please go on writing...
I wrote this last year.. I saw my notebook while i was cleaning up my old stuff a few weeks back..
I've got not enough time to write now.. i guess i'll have to spend more time in the bathroom again..hehe (i wrote this one on the throne!shh... weird I know, the writings i consider my best were written at my worst..)
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Re: repentant soul
thank you Sunnypk.. It's been a while since I wrote here in EC.. .. .. i miss it here........ :(Sunnypk wrote:u have written very nice dear
keep it up !
:)
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Re: repentant soul
TearHere wrote:Thanks alot!. :D ..Krisi wrote:Nice TearHear! I like it. :)
Please go on writing...
I wrote this last year.. I saw my notebook while i was cleaning up my old stuff a few weeks back..
I've got not enough time to write now.. i guess i'll have to spend more time in the bathroom again..hehe (i wrote this one on the throne!shh... weird I know, the writings i consider my best were written at my worst..)
hahahahahahahahahahaha ..... :P :P
I can sense it here. .... so then, you can write more....
see you. (you're funny!)
bye.
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Re: repentant soul
yes, I will.. Maybe in a week or two you'll see it here..Krisi wrote:TearHere,
Please write some more...
I can't tell.. sometimes i feel like writing sometimes I don't..
It just comes and goes..and I can't really just tell..
Though it's so sweet of you to want to read some more of my writings.. I guess i can post some from last year's poems..thanks krisi.. :D
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Re: repentant soul
I'll wait for it.TearHere wrote:yes, I will.. Maybe in a week or two you'll see it here..Krisi wrote:TearHere,
Please write some more...
I can't tell.. sometimes i feel like writing sometimes I don't..
It just comes and goes..and I can't really just tell..
Though it's so sweet of you to want to read some more of my writings.. I guess i can post some from last year's poems..thanks krisi.. :D
Thanks.
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Re: repentant soul
Hi Tearhere.I think u r a poet.
really I hope I arrive at your level.
I want to be a friend to the poet who is you.Good luck.
really I hope I arrive at your level.
I want to be a friend to the poet who is you.Good luck.
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