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LOVELY FACE
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world
our life is like a night mare
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wooooooooooooooooooow
it seems that iam the first one to read ur poem today :)

well
i see a big change in ur tone but i fell that there is a symbliosm in this poem am right or?????????


keep on this soul
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you have done very good job:)

keep it up
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Shakespear,
Sweets is right your tone has changed but I still find it funny... :P I think you're a funny person. rascal! :P
You perk up my day... :) Thanks!
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thanks for everuone.
sweet,ur the 1st one who read my poem.thanks
krisi you can`t arouse me and I think you`re bastard or bitch because you describe me as rascal.
I think you`re in need to be intercoursed :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
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it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views

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shakespear

Could you please check rascal in your dictionary. It's used to describe a small child who has a fondness for causing trouble in a playful way. Not as what you have in mind. That's why I connected it after saying you're funny. I regard it more as a compliment cuz I know we're no more kids...
Well, if you have a negative meaning to it, I want you to know that I have nothing in mind. I just looked at everything as a play upon reading your poem.
I'm sorry if I've been misunderstood and honestly have no bad intentions in saying it. I was not thinking that it would be taken in a negative way.
Well thanks anyway.
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Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views

Hope you understand well

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Thanks Sunnypk.
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Krisi wrote:
Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views

Hope you understand well

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you are always welcomed Dear Krisi :)
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Sunnypk wrote:
Krisi wrote:
Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views

Hope you understand well

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you are always welcomed Dear Krisi :)
Why is your welcome in the past tense? :roll:
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To Krisi:

:D .. you are always welcome.. is it fine now
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Sunnypk wrote:To Krisi:

:D .. you are always welcome.. is it fine now
hahahaha, OK! :P
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Krisi I so sorry for my words cuz I understood it as a bad word but couldn`t you choose kinder word?
Again I`m so sorry for my misunderstand.Good luck.
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shakespear wrote:Krisi I so sorry for my words cuz I understood it as a bad word but couldn`t you choose kinder word?
Again I`m so sorry for my misunderstand.Good luck.
I'm sorry about that. Maybe I'll minimize using it. Yes, I'll use another word! :wink:
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so can we say that every things is ok :D :D
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sweets wrote:so can we say that every things is ok :D :D
You won't know until you try! :lol: :P
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Krisi wrote:
sweets wrote:so can we say that every things is ok :D :D
You won't know until you try! :lol: :P

:mrgreen:

so keep using practicing of this word :D sweet than you maybe get it
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Sunnypk wrote:
Krisi wrote:
sweets wrote:so can we say that every things is ok :D :D
You won't know until you try! :lol: :P

:mrgreen:

so keep using practicing of this word :D sweet than you maybe get it
sweets meant (was referring to) any word, Sunnypk. :|
There are really some words that have dual meanings. And these meanings whether good or bad will depend on the person using it and the the receiver of the message. It's not really the speakers fault if ever they have been misunderstood. The receiver should take the essence of the word from the whole context of the message. :|
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HI everyone,
Krisi, I`m so sorry to speak like that but u described me as a vi llain when u use the word "rascal",
U could check it in the dictionary and u have to use words kinder than this rude word.
Again I`m so sorry 4 u and 4 everyone in this club.
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shakespear wrote:HI everyone,
Krisi, I`m so sorry to speak like that but u described me as a vi llain when u use the word "rascal",
U could check it in the dictionary and u have to use words kinder than this rude word.
Again I`m so sorry 4 u and 4 everyone in this club.
It's now a thing of the past. Damage was done! But it's OK...I'm not thinking of it anymore.
If you are suggesting to check it in the dictionary then I would recommend you to buy another dictionary (latest one).
(And please just refer to my old post because I just can't go on repeating the same answers to you, it's kind of boring for me.)

I'm sorry 4 u too! :)
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Hi everyone.I sent an apology on Sun. Mar. 23- 2008 but I can`t see it in this page,why?
Anyhow, I`d like to say sorry cuz I spoke like that but u describe me as villain " rascal".
u can use kinder word than this word.Good luck.
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If really so than thanks to understand me
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Hi sunnypk. My friend I`d like to thank u cuz u advise me.
We must all learn from others.thanks again.
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it a wonderful describeof the face dont give up and keep up writing
good job :wink:
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thank u
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hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
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hi
from time to time i read my poems and try 2 collect them,
try 2 remember them ,
2 remember the events related 2 them
that is ok
now i feel cool now
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hi everyone and goodluck
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i think its great sth new
we have to live our life freely
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sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
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hi farah
wr r u?
plz keep contact
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shakespear wrote:Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Hi! i hadnt read this poem and i think it will take much time to read all of them :D.
well this poem is full brightness u used sweet words, it's so nice.
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thnx friend and i hope to read ur last poem....
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shakespear wrote:LOVELY FACE
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world

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