What was that?

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What was that?

Postby englishlearner » Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:39 am

How could you be so insane,
Or were my feelings for you all in vein?

The feelings in my eyes,
Not even once crossed through your mind wise?
Or am I a silly creed,
To think you could my eyes read?

In the walk of life, in those lonely nights,
I could see in your eyes the sparkling lights,
That gave me hope,that made me believe,
That you will never let me lonely live.
Or did I read something that your eyes never said?
Then what was that gave me such a strength that has still never fed?

Now that you are far away
I sway
The feelings hasn't slightly reduce
And it will be there until I am from the earth deduce.

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Re: What was that?

Postby angeleyez » Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:32 pm

Nice:)

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Re: What was that?

Postby englishlearner » Wed Apr 30, 2008 5:42 pm

Thanks for your reply.

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Re: What was that?

Postby sweets » Sat May 03, 2008 1:49 pm

so senstive
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Re: What was that?

Postby englishlearner » Sun May 04, 2008 2:34 pm

Hi sweets,

Thanks for your reply.

I thought noone here liked my poem except angel.

Anyways,I think life is dream and we all need to experience it.With every experience we get to know something new.What say?

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Re: What was that?

Postby sweets » Sun May 04, 2008 5:08 pm

"I think life is dream and we all need to experience it.With every experience we get to'

but sometimes some cricumstaneces makes this dream nightmare according to this experiences so not everything is soft and sweet

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
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