THEY CALL GOD LOUDLY

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rksingh
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THEY CALL GOD LOUDLY

Post by rksingh » Mon May 05, 2008 4:38 am

The whole night they blare
senseless mantras to arouse
gods and keep mortals
from sleep without caring how
they hurt the old, sick and child

they don't sing praise
with understanding if they knock
the door will open:
love compels descent of divine
in white silence reigns spirit


--R.K.SINGH

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Re: THEY CALL GOD LOUDLY

Post by Vega » Sat May 10, 2008 3:58 pm

Good poem!

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Re: THEY CALL GOD LOUDLY

Post by shakespear » Sun May 18, 2008 9:21 am

Hi rksingh
This poem is good and I think that there is something in it, I don`t know what it is but I feel it`s close to my heart.
Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: THEY CALL GOD LOUDLY

Post by rksingh » Sat May 24, 2008 7:27 am

Thanks Xkalibur and Shakespear for appreciating the poem. I feel encouraged
R K

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