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Postby AlexVlasoff » Tue May 06, 2008 1:27 pm

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I'm getting bad,
Getting mad,
Getting risen of my goal!
Save, give a chance!
Melt your prance!
Feel attracting force by soul!

I have a dreams
It's convince
We would live in paradise!
But, you aren't knows,
Your eyes closed
'Cause I can not realize.


06.05.2008
I am not in my way, it's only reflection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.

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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby sweets » Wed May 07, 2008 1:43 pm

i like this one spically this
"I'm getting bad,
Getting mad,
Getting risen of my goal!
Save, give a chance!
Melt your prance!
Feel attracting force by soul!"

cuz. i live and living all this situations but when i'll get better no one knows?

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
and keep on
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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby AlexVlasoff » Wed May 07, 2008 3:47 pm

Sweets! You made me good! When I was writing this one I thought that You would like my creation. <!> kiss
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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby sweets » Thu May 08, 2008 7:57 am

well
i write what i feel toward ur words

iam so happy if i make make u feeling good

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby murugan » Sat May 10, 2008 6:28 pm

Dear Sweets

He ( Alex vlasoff) is a psycho. Becareful when you approach with him

If you can't believe you will feel in future

take care
murugan

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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby AlexVlasoff » Sun May 11, 2008 2:19 am

Murugan back off! How you told this about stranger (me)! If you are airhead don't show that !
I am not in my way, it's only reflection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.

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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby murugan » Sun May 11, 2008 7:47 am

Dear Sweets and others

He ( Alex vlasoff) is a psycho. Becareful when you approach with him

If you can't believe you will feel in future

take care
murugan

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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby sweets » Sun May 11, 2008 1:56 pm

even if he is as what u call
art has no relation of this or that sometimes even phsycho wirtes well
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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby murugan » Sun May 11, 2008 7:16 pm

Dear Sweets

Thanks for the statement.

God may bless you. Finally I want to say It is better not to reply anything to him

you are replying everybody's thoughts, fot that I never say like that. Think about it.

If you not accept it, say good bye to me. That's all.

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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby sweets » Mon May 12, 2008 5:35 am

well
i do not understand u could u explain ur view point plz. if u feek embarass to talk here send ur view point at my pm.

cheeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: *** unnamed ***

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:53 am

Hi Alex vlasoff
I think ur poem is very good and u have to continue
Good bye
our life is like a night mare


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