LUST & SPIRIT

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LUST & SPIRIT

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LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
our life is like a night mare
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shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
the last four lines were powerful forbiden form every thing woooooooow
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Hi
I didn`t understand ur comment
Could u explain it for me
Thanks
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i mean that the four lines are about forbidens in life in genral "do touch ,do not this or that "and so on so when you combain these orders in simle lines i like them

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دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Hi sweet
Ur comment seems better than my poem.
I like it.
Much things r forbidden to us.
our life is like a night mare
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I like ur pen when you'r writing .
very strong word and too nice .. I feel it
thank u my friend I want to read more
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Hi loola
I who must thank u cuz u encourage me
Always I want to hear about u so be on contact and don`t be late
thanks again and good bye.
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hi
r u with me?
r u waiting 4 me?
i love u but ............. u r not
good uck
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hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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i think there is a connection between this poem and another poem u had written. right?
that poem about our parents and the paradise
we have to live our life freely
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shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen

what is the meaning?
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shakespear wrote: How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Shakespear, this poem caught my attention, When you think everything is too good, there is always something that keeps these good things are for us.
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yeah r8....good thing won't be full...i think so...
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shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
short poem
our life is like a night mare
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