LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
LUST & SPIRIT
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LUST & SPIRIT
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
the last four lines were powerful forbiden form every thing woooooooowshakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Hi
I didn`t understand ur comment
Could u explain it for me
Thanks
I didn`t understand ur comment
Could u explain it for me
Thanks
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
i mean that the four lines are about forbidens in life in genral "do touch ,do not this or that "and so on so when you combain these orders in simle lines i like them
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Hi sweet
Ur comment seems better than my poem.
I like it.
Much things r forbidden to us.
Ur comment seems better than my poem.
I like it.
Much things r forbidden to us.
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
I like ur pen when you'r writing .
very strong word and too nice .. I feel it
thank u my friend I want to read more
very strong word and too nice .. I feel it
thank u my friend I want to read more
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Hi loola
I who must thank u cuz u encourage me
Always I want to hear about u so be on contact and don`t be late
thanks again and good bye.
I who must thank u cuz u encourage me
Always I want to hear about u so be on contact and don`t be late
thanks again and good bye.
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
hi
r u with me?
r u waiting 4 me?
i love u but ............. u r not
good uck
bye
r u with me?
r u waiting 4 me?
i love u but ............. u r not
good uck
bye
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
i think there is a connection between this poem and another poem u had written. right?
that poem about our parents and the paradise
that poem about our parents and the paradise
we have to live our life freely
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
what is the meaning?
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
Shakespear, this poem caught my attention, When you think everything is too good, there is always something that keeps these good things are for us.shakespear wrote: How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
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Re: LUST & SPIRIT
yeah r8....good thing won't be full...i think so...
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short poemshakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen
our life is like a night mare