LUST & SPIRIT

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Re: LUST & SPIRIT

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:07 pm

shakespear wrote:LUST & SPIRIT
Long time ago, I climbed the leafy tree
Which was wide-limbed
Reposing up there, I could feel two apples
They were hidden under leaves
At once I cried, how marvelous tree you're
How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone
Even me
Forbidden to reap
Forbidden to touch
Forbidden even to be seen



what is the meaning?

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Re: LUST & SPIRIT

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:09 pm

shakespear wrote:How marvelous fruits you bear
I wanted to reap them
They were forbidden for everyone


Shakespear, this poem caught my attention, When you think everything is too good, there is always something that keeps these good things are for us.

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Re: LUST & SPIRIT

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:35 am

yeah r8....good thing won't be full...i think so...


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