Ghost Stories............

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:00 pm

And I didn't know that Annaa is a commander :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Annaa » Mon Jun 16, 2008 1:13 pm

Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ?? :lol: :lol: :shock: :shock:
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:08 am

Annaa wrote:Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ?? :lol: :lol: :shock: :shock:


Cuz I think................. :lol: :lol:
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Annaa » Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:33 am

denvinbo wrote:
Annaa wrote:Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ?? :lol: :lol: :shock: :shock:


Cuz I think................. :lol: :lol:


??? :roll:
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Tue Jun 17, 2008 11:15 am

Annaa wrote:
denvinbo wrote:
Annaa wrote:Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ?? :lol: :lol: :shock: :shock:


Cuz I think................. :lol: :lol:


??? :roll:


You make me difficult to say, Annaa............... :shock: :shock: :lol:
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Annaa » Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:37 pm

Say it :evil: :evil: :evil:
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Wed Jun 18, 2008 4:13 am

Annaa wrote:Say it :evil: :evil: :evil:


:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Annaa » Wed Jun 18, 2008 8:01 am

denvinbo wrote:
Annaa wrote:Say it :evil: :evil: :evil:


:lol: :lol: :lol:





I don`t care ;-) ;-)
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby denvinbo » Wed Jun 18, 2008 10:17 am

Annaa wrote:
denvinbo wrote:
Annaa wrote:Say it :evil: :evil: :evil:


:lol: :lol: :lol:





I don`t care ;-) ;-)


You're not stable, Annaa......... :-(
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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Annaa » Wed Jun 18, 2008 11:57 am

Why
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..

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Re: Ghost Stories............

Postby Krisi » Fri Jun 27, 2008 11:34 am

denvinbo wrote:The next story....

Night No Moon..........

Character:
Phan
Nga
My (Nga's sister)
Mrs.Ha and Mr.Tung (Phan's parents)
Mr.Tan (Nga's father)
Thuan
Ms.Kim

The story happened at a farm. That night, at Mr.Tung house, there was a funeral, Mrs.Ha was crying before the casket, in the casket, it was Phan body. He died... A woman said:
- Phew... Don't cry, Ha. Phan died, even you cry to river, Phan never return.
Mrs.Ha continued crying, although the woman said anything. But suddenly, a black cat appeared at the window behind Phan's casket with red eyes, it sounded:
- MEOW........................
The sound made everybody in the room feel frightened. They all stepped backwards, the black cat disappeared, left the black night behind. Mrs.ha was very scary, but she was still crying. Time to close the casket, 2 boys helped Mr.Tung carry the lid, but Mrs.Ha didn't accept, she said:
- Phan haven't died, he hasn't died.... You can't close the casket....He will return....return.....
But anyway, the casket was closed, although Mrs.Ha shouted very loud. Right after the casket closed, the black cat appeared again and sounded:
- MEOW....................
Then, it disappeared, but another sight appeared.....How surprising, that was Phan....But... His body was full of murderous air, the blood on his face covered his eyes and mouth....Suddenly, he stared....and touched the window.....

:arrow: Is Phan still alive?

To be continued..... ;-)



Please continue... what's next Denvinbo? :-)
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