Ghost Stories............
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Re: Ghost Stories............
And I didn't know that Annaa is a commander
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Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ??
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Cuz I think.................Annaa wrote:Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ??
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???denvinbo wrote:Cuz I think.................Annaa wrote:Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ??
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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You make me difficult to say, Annaa...............Annaa wrote:???denvinbo wrote:Cuz I think.................Annaa wrote:Nd what makes u think that Anna is a commander ??
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Say it
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Annaa wrote:Say it
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denvinbo wrote:Annaa wrote:Say it
I don`t care
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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You're not stable, Annaa.........Annaa wrote:denvinbo wrote:Annaa wrote:Say it
I don`t care
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Why
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Re: Ghost Stories............
denvinbo wrote:The next story....
Night No Moon..........
Character:
Phan
Nga
My (Nga's sister)
Mrs.Ha and Mr.Tung (Phan's parents)
Mr.Tan (Nga's father)
Thuan
Ms.Kim
The story happened at a farm. That night, at Mr.Tung house, there was a funeral, Mrs.Ha was crying before the casket, in the casket, it was Phan body. He died... A woman said:
- Phew... Don't cry, Ha. Phan died, even you cry to river, Phan never return.
Mrs.Ha continued crying, although the woman said anything. But suddenly, a black cat appeared at the window behind Phan's casket with red eyes, it sounded:
- MEOW........................
The sound made everybody in the room feel frightened. They all stepped backwards, the black cat disappeared, left the black night behind. Mrs.ha was very scary, but she was still crying. Time to close the casket, 2 boys helped Mr.Tung carry the lid, but Mrs.Ha didn't accept, she said:
- Phan haven't died, he hasn't died.... You can't close the casket....He will return....return.....
But anyway, the casket was closed, although Mrs.Ha shouted very loud. Right after the casket closed, the black cat appeared again and sounded:
- MEOW....................
Then, it disappeared, but another sight appeared.....How surprising, that was Phan....But... His body was full of murderous air, the blood on his face covered his eyes and mouth....Suddenly, he stared....and touched the window.....
Is Phan still alive?
To be continued.....
Please continue... what's next Denvinbo?
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