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I describe Barbara
Your hair`s like dark night
Of anything I can`t catch sight
Your face`s very bright
Lights the dark from its height
* * *
The apples borrowed your check`s colour
The hind wished your diamond eyes
And looking into them, I`m in failure
Sailing in them, I`ll be the sailor
* * *
Your lips are like ripe fig
Delicious taste in my mouth
Your speech`s voice`s like gig
Soft music takes me to the south
* * *
Your neck is a beautiful figure
Its taste is like sugar
Closely coming, I stepped to nip
from life-spring I `v to sip
* * *
Your breasts are like mushroom
Dear me! I must face my doom
I must suck and taste wine
Then the rosy nipples will shine
* * *
Your belly is very flat
Not skinny, not ugly, never fat
Your buttocks are supple in hand
I`ve never seen white sand
* * *
Your crotch is holy temple
An adorer knees before this sample
I shot a luxurious sigh
When I saw marvelous thigh
* * *

I like a lot this poem,who is Barbara ?

hi annaa
thnx 4 this comment.
barbara represents the holy love not real woman.this poem represents our real emotions
and if she was real, i can`t disclose her name until she accept.
thnx again
c u soon

shakespear wrote:hi annaa
thnx 4 this comment.
barbara represents the holy love not real woman.this poem represents our real emotions
and if she was real, i can`t disclose her name until she accept.
thnx again
c u soon

Aha,oke

I describe Barbara
Your hair`s like dark night
Of anything I can`t catch sight
Your face`s very bright
Lights the dark from its height
* * *
The apples borrowed your check`s colour
The hind wished your diamond eyes
And looking into them, I`m in failure
Sailing in them, I`ll be the sailor
* * *
Your lips are like ripe fig
Delicious taste in my mouth
Your speech`s voice`s like gig
Soft music takes me to the south
* * *
Your neck is a beautiful figure
Its taste is like sugar
Closely coming, I stepped to nip
from life-spring I `v to sip
* * *
Your breasts are like mushroom
Dear me! I must face my doom
I must suck and taste wine
Then the rosy nipples will shine
* * *
Your belly is very flat
Not skinny, not ugly, never fat
Your buttocks are supple in hand
I`ve never seen white sand
* * *
Your crotch is holy temple
An adorer knees before this sample
I shot a luxurious sigh
When I saw marvelous thigh
* * *
i want to issu it agin koz it`s not clear there
thnx

hi
well i read not only once but twice i see that ur as plato plato was looking for the city of virtue and ur looking for the impossible woman but did u think that this beauty might kill?


cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers

hi sweet
i`d like to thank you on this comment, and although it is short but it carries much meanings & emotions.
you said months ago a proverb " some of love may kill" ومن الحب ما قتل -.
I`m not as Plato who looked for his city, and there is a great difference between him & me, koz i`m real and expressing real things in our daily life.So I think we can find real love decribed in my poem.
thnx again, and be always in touch with me.
c u soon

hi
we always turn our head towards the past but it doesn`t come back to us .it runs as fast as a train.
let`s live our happy days
good luck

hi
terrible

sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

hi farah
where r u?
i'm waiting ur comments so plz send me some of them
i hope u r ok
c u and have good luck and god save u

Shakespear they are impressive words, now i got why i cant show this poem to my teachers :D

yeah u r right and i told u not to show it to ur teacher ...thnx