Haiku!!!!!!!!!!

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doode
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Haiku!!!!!!!!!!

Post by doode » Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:40 am

First of all i want to say that it is the first time to write in this forum .Iam a bit afraid of your feedbacks but lets try...

No love,no hope,no....
But you have to live, no choice....
To live life as is

leo,kind,patient,snob
Nervous,expensive clothes,love
Funny,smart,orange

Sea,blue,sometimes clear
I twirl in the blue sea waves
The sea my passion

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Annaa
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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!

Post by Annaa » Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:02 am

Nice poem,I really like it,keep it ;-) .
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..

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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!

Post by doode » Sun Jun 29, 2008 9:10 pm

Thank you annaa for your reply and i promise i will do my best

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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!

Post by Krisi » Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:23 pm

doode wrote:First of all i want to say that it is the first time to write in this forum .Iam a bit afraid of your feedbacks but lets try...

No love,no hope,no....
But you have to live, no choice....
To live life as is

leo,kind,patient,snob
Nervous,expensive clothes,love
Funny,smart,orange

Sea,blue,sometimes clear
I twirl in the blue sea waves
The sea my passion
This is really good...
Welcome doode!!!
:-)
esl member since 2007

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Annaa
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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!

Post by Annaa » Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:42 pm

doode wrote:Thank you annaa for your reply and i promise i will do my best



U r welcome {-;
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..

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