First of all i want to say that it is the first time to write in this forum .Iam a bit afraid of your feedbacks but lets try...
No love,no hope,no....
But you have to live, no choice....
To live life as is
leo,kind,patient,snob
Nervous,expensive clothes,love
Funny,smart,orange
Sea,blue,sometimes clear
I twirl in the blue sea waves
The sea my passion
Haiku!!!!!!!!!!
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doode
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Annaa
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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!
Nice poem,I really like it,keep it 
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.If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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doode
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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you annaa for your reply and i promise i will do my best
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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!
This is really good...doode wrote:First of all i want to say that it is the first time to write in this forum .Iam a bit afraid of your feedbacks but lets try...
No love,no hope,no....
But you have to live, no choice....
To live life as is
leo,kind,patient,snob
Nervous,expensive clothes,love
Funny,smart,orange
Sea,blue,sometimes clear
I twirl in the blue sea waves
The sea my passion
Welcome doode!!!
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Annaa
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Re: Haiku!!!!!!!!!!
doode wrote:Thank you annaa for your reply and i promise i will do my best
U r welcome
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..