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First of all i want to say that it is the first time to write in this forum .Iam a bit afraid of your feedbacks but lets try...

No love,no hope,no....
But you have to live, no choice....
To live life as is

leo,kind,patient,snob
Nervous,expensive clothes,love
Funny,smart,orange

Sea,blue,sometimes clear
I twirl in the blue sea waves
The sea my passion

Nice poem,I really like it,keep it .

Thank you annaa for your reply and i promise i will do my best

doode wrote:First of all i want to say that it is the first time to write in this forum .Iam a bit afraid of your feedbacks but lets try...

No love,no hope,no....
But you have to live, no choice....
To live life as is

leo,kind,patient,snob
Nervous,expensive clothes,love
Funny,smart,orange

Sea,blue,sometimes clear
I twirl in the blue sea waves
The sea my passion

This is really good...
Welcome doode!!!

doode wrote:Thank you annaa for your reply and i promise i will do my best

U r welcome