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TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Every night I lie in dark
Trying to imagine her lovely face
Darling Elena, give me a mark
I became in so bad case
* * *
My torture has been increasing
Nothing can dispel my pain
Oh Elena! you are pleasing...
Your lover, you`re sane
* * *
From me, she is vey distant
How can I hug her or kiss?
My life becomes on the slant
I really miss her kindness
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad
* * *
THE END

sooo nice Shakspeare
if that was true,she would be so lucky

oh Elena
i only wish that ur not a dream cuz. dreams like u are so danger sometimes mixs with reality

cheeeeeeeeeeers

Shakespear do u have any book ?

hi everyone
i`d like 2 thank u 4 these lovely comments.this poem is the 2nd part of "to elena" and u must read the 1st part.
sweet sometimes we must our lovely dreams to escape from our hard & life. once u said that we sometimes tell lies 4 many reasons.
dear anna, i don`t understand what book u mean maybe u mean my volume or a book else
have nice time & thnx
bye.
.

so shakespear you use my ideas that's good
u can dream but be sure to wake up at right moment

cheeeeeeeeeeers

shakespear wrote:hi everyone
i`d like 2 thank u 4 these lovely comments.this poem is the 2nd part of "to elena" and u must read the 1st part.
sweet sometimes we must our lovely dreams to escape from our hard & life. once u said that we sometimes tell lies 4 many reasons.
dear anna, i don`t understand what book u mean maybe u mean my volume or a book else
have nice time & thnx
bye.
.

I thought do u have ur own book ??,do u understand now me,a book that u wrote.

hi annaa
plz contact with me on this email:*******.com
i`m waiting
thnx
c u soon
bye

shakespear wrote:hi annaa
plz contact with me on this email:*******.com
i`m waiting
thnx
c u soon
bye

C u

hi
where r u annaa?
i`m waiting 4 u.
contact me plz
c u
bye

shakespear wrote:hi
where r u annaa?
i`m waiting 4 u.
contact me plz
c u
bye

I`m sorry but nowdays my msn isn`t working .

hi anna
feel free and have nice days
i wanna contact u but u said that ur sms isnot well nowadays
ok c u later
bye

hi
really i loved elena but now i can`t contact her so what to do?
advise me
i`m waiting
cu soon
bye

hi everyone and goodluck

i`m eager to read the 1st part

i`m eager to read the 1st part

shakespear wrote:TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Every night I lie in dark
Trying to imagine her lovely face
Darling Elena, give me a mark
I became in so bad case
* * *
My torture has been increasing
Nothing can dispel my pain
Oh Elena! you are pleasing...
Your lover, you`re sane
* * *
From me, she is vey distant
How can I hug her or kiss?
My life becomes on the slant
I really miss her kindness
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad
* * *
THE END

sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

hello my friend anna
where r u nowadays
i hope u r ok
have lovely times

shakespear wrote:

shakespear wrote:TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad

Good Poem!, it expresses sadness because of a love who was there and then went...As u said in the poem; having a love through distance, is like having a dream during a whole night and u dont wanna wake up, but unfortunaly although we refuse to do it, it will happen.

Lara wrote:having a love through distance, is like having a dream during a whole night and u dont wanna wake up, but unfortunaly although we refuse to do it, it will happen.

what on earth a lovely comments is this?!!!
really u always choose expressing words by which u make lovely comments... thnx 4 this comment and have nice moments
c u

hello
inspiration may come from poems, comments u read or may be from talk with ur friends or from scene u catch sight in the life...so i think communication with others is so useful

the aim of this term that i think ur comment sometimes inspires us
thnx

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments