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TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 6:20 am
by shakespear
TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Every night I lie in dark
Trying to imagine her lovely face
Darling Elena, give me a mark
I became in so bad case
* * *
My torture has been increasing
Nothing can dispel my pain
Oh Elena! you are pleasing...
Your lover, you`re sane
* * *
From me, she is vey distant
How can I hug her or kiss?
My life becomes on the slant
I really miss her kindness
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad
* * *
THE END

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 9:24 am
by JasmineQ
sooo nice Shakspeare
if that was true,she would be so lucky {-;

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 9:59 am
by sweets
oh Elena
i only wish that ur not a dream cuz. dreams like u are so danger sometimes mixs with reality

cheeeeeeeeeeers

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:42 am
by Annaa
Shakespear do u have any book ?

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:08 am
by shakespear
hi everyone
i`d like 2 thank u 4 these lovely comments.this poem is the 2nd part of "to elena" and u must read the 1st part.
sweet sometimes we must our lovely dreams to escape from our hard & life. once u said that we sometimes tell lies 4 many reasons.
dear anna, i don`t understand what book u mean maybe u mean my volume or a book else
have nice time & thnx
bye.
.

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:50 am
by sweets
so shakespear you use my ideas that's good
u can dream but be sure to wake up at right moment

cheeeeeeeeeeers

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:40 pm
by Annaa
shakespear wrote:hi everyone
i`d like 2 thank u 4 these lovely comments.this poem is the 2nd part of "to elena" and u must read the 1st part.
sweet sometimes we must our lovely dreams to escape from our hard & life. once u said that we sometimes tell lies 4 many reasons.
dear anna, i don`t understand what book u mean maybe u mean my volume or a book else
have nice time & thnx
bye.
.



I thought do u have ur own book ??,do u understand now me,a book that u wrote.

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:46 pm
by shakespear
hi annaa
plz contact with me on this email:darkstarthe1st@yahoo.com
i`m waiting
thnx
c u soon
bye

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:00 pm
by Annaa
shakespear wrote:hi annaa
plz contact with me on this email:darkstarthe1st@yahoo.com
i`m waiting
thnx
c u soon
bye


C u

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:01 am
by shakespear
hi
where r u annaa?
i`m waiting 4 u.
contact me plz
c u
bye

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:13 pm
by Annaa
shakespear wrote:hi
where r u annaa?
i`m waiting 4 u.
contact me plz
c u
bye
I`m sorry but nowdays my msn isn`t working :-? :-? .

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 11:24 am
by shakespear
hi anna
feel free and have nice days
i wanna contact u but u said that ur sms isnot well nowadays
ok c u later
bye

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:40 pm
by shakespear
hi
really i loved elena but now i can`t contact her so what to do?
advise me
i`m waiting
cu soon
bye

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:09 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:40 am
by farah
i`m eager to read the 1st part

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:47 am
by farah
i`m eager to read the 1st part

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:14 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Every night I lie in dark
Trying to imagine her lovely face
Darling Elena, give me a mark
I became in so bad case
* * *
My torture has been increasing
Nothing can dispel my pain
Oh Elena! you are pleasing...
Your lover, you`re sane
* * *
From me, she is vey distant
How can I hug her or kiss?
My life becomes on the slant
I really miss her kindness
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad
* * *
THE END
sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:36 pm
by shakespear
hello my friend anna
where r u nowadays
i hope u r ok
have lovely times

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:17 am
by Lara
shakespear wrote:
shakespear wrote:TO ELENA/2
I loved whom I`ve never seen
But I talk with her everyday
Through the net I touch Elen
By my heart, in holy way
* * *
Once, I dreamt we`re together
At the seaside, we were very glad
Suddenly, I woke up to the suffer
And found my spirit was sad


Good Poem!, it expresses sadness because of a love who was there and then went...As u said in the poem; having a love through distance, is like having a dream during a whole night and u dont wanna wake up, but unfortunaly although we refuse to do it, it will happen.

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:56 am
by shakespear
Lara wrote:having a love through distance, is like having a dream during a whole night and u dont wanna wake up, but unfortunaly although we refuse to do it, it will happen.
what on earth a lovely comments is this?!!!
really u always choose expressing words by which u make lovely comments... thnx 4 this comment and have nice moments
c u

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 6:50 pm
by Lara
Thanks This happens when we read great poems like urs

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:58 pm
by shakespear
hello
inspiration may come from poems, comments u read or may be from talk with ur friends or from scene u catch sight in the life...so i think communication with others is so useful

the aim of this term that i think ur comment sometimes inspires us
thnx

Re: TO ELENA/2

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:03 am
by shakespear
i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments