hi sweet and congratulations
sorry koz i wasnot the 1st who read ur great poems but forgive me that long time ago i didn`t visit this club.
ur poem seem deep and sad .it rather reminds me the dark , don`t ask me why koz i don`t know the cause and its very close to my heart and now i know why koz it reflects the feelings inside my heart. sometimes i feel i who wrote it because of the style.
in ur poem u used "or" twice "song or smile" and "remember or try to" and u succeed in that, even at 1st time i read
it i feel its heavy on ears but its ok.
congatulations again and ahead , really u r a poetess.
c u later
our life is like a night mare