Ode to Nadia the Russian

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Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:28 am

I C U
Ode to Nadia the Russian

I see you, every day
What can I, do or say
With you I, have no way
Your love is, like a play…………………….. I see you, every day (1)
I see you lovely bird
But I can`t say a word
My love song, have you heard?
With me come , don`t delay…………….. I see you, every day (2)
I love you and you love me
Endless love, you`ll be
For your sake I cross the sea
Sway in walk, please sway……………….. I see you, every day (3)
I`m yours, and you`re mine
Don`t grieve, you`ll shine
Let`s sip, tasty wine
Stay with me, stay……stay……………… I see you, every day (4)
My effort`s, for your sake
Don`t sleep, be awake
Why does your, body shake?
Your beauty is, like a ray……….……… I see you, every day (5)
You`re really, very smart
Your name`s carved, on my heart
Sweet dreams, let`s start
And let`s ride, love-sleigh……………… I see you, every day (6)
• * *
our life is like a night mare

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Postby sweets » Mon Sep 15, 2008 9:28 am

it's like a song so light with hopeful tone it sounds good for me at least u put the sad tone away iam so galde for this

did Nadia read it ??????????????
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Postby Psixochka » Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:23 pm

this ode is really beautiful!!! I like it very much!!! I think, that Shakespear wrote it with sole... I don't know, what else to say ... :~:
Shakespear, its a lovely work, go on in this way :-D :-D :-D

Nadia MUST read it, if she hasn't done it yet!!!!!!!!!!
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

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Postby LoOost » Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:59 am

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

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Postby shakespear » Sun Nov 02, 2008 2:39 pm

thanks,thanks,thanks................my dear friends
really you encourged me and i hope meet u oneday.sweet ur comment is very good and i`m not sad but what can i do
the sad tone always sticks with me.
any way thanks 4 these lovely line
c u and bye
our life is like a night mare

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Postby shakespear » Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:17 am

shakespear wrote:[b]I C U
Ode to Nadia the Russian[/b]

I see you, every day
What can I, do or say
With you I, have no way
Your love is, like a play…………………….. I see you, every day (1)
I see you lovely bird
But I can`t say a word
My love song, have you heard?
With me come , don`t delay…………….. I see you, every day (2)
I love you and you love me
Endless love, you`ll be
For your sake I cross the sea
Sway in walk, please sway……………….. I see you, every day (3)
I`m yours, and you`re mine
Don`t grieve, you`ll shine
Let`s sip, tasty wine
Stay with me, stay……stay……………… I see you, every day (4)
My effort`s, for your sake
Don`t sleep, be awake
Why does your, body shake?
Your beauty is, like a ray……….……… I see you, every day (5)
You`re really, very smart
Your name`s carved, on my heart
Sweet dreams, let`s start
And let`s ride, love-sleigh……………… I see you, every day (6)
• * *

i liked it very much.....
thnx
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby Sunnypk » Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:23 am

It's nice posting
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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Sat Dec 13, 2008 9:32 am

hi my friend Sunnypk :
i wish i can meet u .
c u soon & gdluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:28 am

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood poem
go ahead
thnx
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Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:13 pm

thnx my dear
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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:12 pm

hello
i think this poem is lyrical so can any body melodize it
gd luck
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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:19 am

hi
i think u care for nadia very much
i envy her
can u speak about her plz?
bye
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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:36 am

hola
yes i car 4 her koz she is one of the deatest friends and i can't speak about her
c u
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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:34 pm

shakespear wrote:I C U
Ode to Nadia the Russian

I see you, every day
What can I, do or say
With you I, have no way
Your love is, like a play…………………….. I see you, every day (1)
I see you lovely bird
But I can`t say a word
My love song, have you heard?
With me come , don`t delay…………….. I see you, every day (2)
I love you and you love me
Endless love, you`ll be
For your sake I cross the sea
Sway in walk, please sway……………….. I see you, every day (3)
I`m yours, and you`re mine
Don`t grieve, you`ll shine
Let`s sip, tasty wine
Stay with me, stay……stay……………… I see you, every day (4)
My effort`s, for your sake
Don`t sleep, be awake
Why does your, body shake?
Your beauty is, like a ray……….……… I see you, every day (5)
You`re really, very smart
Your name`s carved, on my heart
Sweet dreams, let`s start
And let`s ride, love-sleigh……………… I see you, every day (6)
• * *

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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:25 pm

hello farah
where r u?
have nice moments

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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:30 am

hi friends
hope happy times 4 u all

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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:33 am

shakespear!! what a nice love poem, i think u can meet verey well through ur poems :D.
But here u r in loved and i have the impression that she is not, am i right?

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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:14 am

hi
the poem is lyrical and its imagination about russian woman ....i think every one has his own imagination ...have good day

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Re: Ode to Nadia the Russian

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 4:51 am

thank you my friends
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