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I C U
Ode to Nadia the Russian

I see you, every day
What can I, do or say
With you I, have no way
Your love is, like a play…………………….. I see you, every day (1)
I see you lovely bird
But I can`t say a word
My love song, have you heard?
With me come , don`t delay…………….. I see you, every day (2)
I love you and you love me
Endless love, you`ll be
For your sake I cross the sea
Sway in walk, please sway……………….. I see you, every day (3)
I`m yours, and you`re mine
Don`t grieve, you`ll shine
Let`s sip, tasty wine
Stay with me, stay……stay……………… I see you, every day (4)
My effort`s, for your sake
Don`t sleep, be awake
Why does your, body shake?
Your beauty is, like a ray……….……… I see you, every day (5)
You`re really, very smart
Your name`s carved, on my heart
Sweet dreams, let`s start
And let`s ride, love-sleigh……………… I see you, every day (6)
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it's like a song so light with hopeful tone it sounds good for me at least u put the sad tone away iam so galde for this

did Nadia read it ??????????????

this ode is really beautiful!!! I like it very much!!! I think, that Shakespear wrote it with sole... I don't know, what else to say ...
Shakespear, its a lovely work, go on in this way

Nadia MUST read it, if she hasn't done it yet!!!!!!!!!!

thanks,thanks,thanks................my dear friends
really you encourged me and i hope meet u oneday.sweet ur comment is very good and i`m not sad but what can i do
the sad tone always sticks with me.
any way thanks 4 these lovely line
c u and bye

shakespear wrote:I C U
Ode to Nadia the Russian

I see you, every day
What can I, do or say
With you I, have no way
Your love is, like a play…………………….. I see you, every day (1)
I see you lovely bird
But I can`t say a word
My love song, have you heard?
With me come , don`t delay…………….. I see you, every day (2)
I love you and you love me
Endless love, you`ll be
For your sake I cross the sea
Sway in walk, please sway……………….. I see you, every day (3)
I`m yours, and you`re mine
Don`t grieve, you`ll shine
Let`s sip, tasty wine
Stay with me, stay……stay……………… I see you, every day (4)
My effort`s, for your sake
Don`t sleep, be awake
Why does your, body shake?
Your beauty is, like a ray……….……… I see you, every day (5)
You`re really, very smart
Your name`s carved, on my heart
Sweet dreams, let`s start
And let`s ride, love-sleigh……………… I see you, every day (6)
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i liked it very much.....
thnx

It's nice posting

hi my friend Sunnypk :
i wish i can meet u .
c u soon & gdluck

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood poem
go ahead
thnx

thnx my dear

hello
i think this poem is lyrical so can any body melodize it
gd luck

hi
i think u care for nadia very much
i envy her
can u speak about her plz?
bye

hola
yes i car 4 her koz she is one of the deatest friends and i can't speak about her
c u

shakespear wrote:I C U
Ode to Nadia the Russian

I see you, every day
What can I, do or say
With you I, have no way
Your love is, like a play…………………….. I see you, every day (1)
I see you lovely bird
But I can`t say a word
My love song, have you heard?
With me come , don`t delay…………….. I see you, every day (2)
I love you and you love me
Endless love, you`ll be
For your sake I cross the sea
Sway in walk, please sway……………….. I see you, every day (3)
I`m yours, and you`re mine
Don`t grieve, you`ll shine
Let`s sip, tasty wine
Stay with me, stay……stay……………… I see you, every day (4)
My effort`s, for your sake
Don`t sleep, be awake
Why does your, body shake?
Your beauty is, like a ray……….……… I see you, every day (5)
You`re really, very smart
Your name`s carved, on my heart
Sweet dreams, let`s start
And let`s ride, love-sleigh……………… I see you, every day (6)
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hello farah
where r u?
have nice moments

hi friends
hope happy times 4 u all

shakespear!! what a nice love poem, i think u can meet verey well through ur poems :D.
But here u r in loved and i have the impression that she is not, am i right?

hi
the poem is lyrical and its imagination about russian woman ....i think every one has his own imagination ...have good day

thank you my friends
have nice moments

this is the lightest poem i wrote...

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