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hi everybody here is my last poem (ı called like this:)) waiting your comments...

hard way


ı can not let to fall down

if ı do,there is a man

at the soundless garden

with his back

againts the willow,

who is me.


I can not let to fall down

for obscuring this shame

ı do the games,sing a song

for hiding the millenarian authentics

from me and you.


ı can not let to fall down

cook the things what ı ate

in my old saucepan

and fill my ego

with this dated story

that is me...

Good poem wolfshade.

This poem makes you think and wonder.

thanks for your comments...