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wolfshade
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the entire

Postby wolfshade » Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:39 pm

the entire


when the time goes to march on

the life is flowing slower

and obviously

it instills in to me

thoroughly...

when the time goes to march on

it makes me to miss the past

and its intention is clear..

it says that,

we are the entire

and now

find it,

clasp it firmly

it is the bigest part of

me...

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Re: the entire

Postby teardrops » Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:12 am

I think you are a deep person wolfshade. Your words are very different
Raindrops,my teardrops. Falling from above,i dont have your love.

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Re: the entire

Postby wolfshade » Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:42 pm

thanks for your comment teardrops..but ı wonder that if it is understandable cause ı am not sure about my english..:)


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