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FLY TO THE PARADISE

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FLY TO THE PARADISE

O bird ! spread both of wings in the sky
Fly with the breeze, fly far to the paradise
Embrace white clouds, enjoy before you die
Fly to the peaks of mountains where ice is very nice

* * *
We toil so hard ,days go without return
Really you're now free but you will be slave
And you're vivid too but you'll soon burn
We're stray in a wide sea , like dolls in a violent wave

* * *
Days go ; days come , live merrily don't mind
The happiness will vanish , the sorrow will reign
Sooner or later we'll die and leave the pleasure behind
Want you waste happy times?! I think you're insane


* * *
our life is like a night mare
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oh shakespear
so wonderful so great no words can express how those words touch my heart :-)

(Days go ; days come , live merrily don't mind
The happiness will vanish , the sorrow will reign
Sooner or later we'll die and leave the pleasure behind
Want you waste happy times?! I think you're insane)

so lovely in spite of sadness it carries
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HI sweet
u r aways the first one who makes comment on my poems and ur comments r very active and give courage to us so i thank u 4 this notes .
do u think i came back to the sad tone?
plz advise me how to leave it and take rid of it!
gdluck friend
c u
our life is like a night mare
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well thanx for ur words

u can not change the sadness tone unless u chang ur self url ife in general the way u see life
i know it's hard but maybe it helps u

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeers
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shakespear wrote:FLY TO THE PARADISE
We toil so hard ,days go without return
Really you're now free but you will be slave
And you're vivid too but you'll soon burn
We're stray in a wide sea , like dolls in a violent wave
I like these words. It is close to me, cuz now there is period in my life when I feel sadness often :-? Good job Shakespear :-)
I agree with Sweets that you should change your attitude to life in general, if you want to change the sadness tone. I think that you change your attitude when something really good happen in your life, just believe in it! I believe :-)
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)
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hi my friend
i like russian people and i thank u on this advice but it`s not up to us that means we can`t be sad or glad koz events affect us
good luck
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hi
i kow what u mean but i think that man can stand and challenge i know its' so hard but trying to live happily is better than standing and blaming our luck

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hi sweet
i don`t blame my luck or destiny and i think u r right but why can`t we choose our lives or parents or at least our names? why some of us tortured while othes r happy?
u r right that we must show happy even we were sad. but can u make this ,plz answer me frankly .don`t say typical speeche.if u r able to show happiness every time i think u r hero.
c u soon and gd luck
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hello
iam not typical or ideal i have my troubles and sadness moments maybe my life is misrable than u maybe not but i follow a collocail proverb (طنش تعش تنعتش)if we transalte it will be like do not listen or think about every single thing
fouce on big deals

i hope u got me

see u
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hi sweet i replied twice but they didn`t reach to the club & don`t know why they didn`t reach.
anyway what i like 2 say that even if we show smile on our lips in spite os our sadness ,our smile will be pale ,faint,dim...koz this smile is not from the heart.
don`t u accept with me?
but at all u r right we must show our happiness although we r sad"وتجلدي للشامتين اريهم----- اني لريب الهر لا اتزعزع"
i think u understand my opinion
gdluck
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always sad poems
why????
i don`t know
we have to live our life freely
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sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
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farah wrote:always sad poems
why????
i don`t know
what can i do?
it's my style and i hope i can change it but it's imposible
anyway thankx
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I liked the tilte alot ( FLY TO PARADISE). Tnx
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hello
thnx alot my friend
i hope we can b friends
have lovely times u and all the readers
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Thanks dear Shakespear,

I really like & appreciate your friendly behavior and nice comments with all the EC members. Be Happy. :-) Yes, we can be friends. :-)
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hi sweethuman how are u ?
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hi sweet how r u?
nice 2 meet u...................
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nice to meet u too here after lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng time
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shakespear wrote:hi sweet how r u?
nice 2 meet u...................
Assalam-O-Alaikum Dear,

انا بخیر. کیف انتا؟ {-: .
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hi friend
where r u from sweethuman?
nice 2 meet u here
have nice moments
do u speak arabic really?
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shakespear wrote:hi friend
where r u from sweethuman?
nice 2 meet u here
have nice moments
do u speak arabic really?
Salam,
Im from the Islamic republic of Afghanistan.
Same here.
Same to you as well.
No, I cant speak arabic, I just know some words. :-P :lol:
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well i'm ok
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hi sweets wr r u???
sorry i can't reach my yahoo msg
have gd luck in ur new job
tell me all ur news
c u
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hi friends
nice moments
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shakespear wrote:FLY TO THE PARADISE

O bird ! spread both of wings in the sky
Fly with the breeze, fly far to the paradise
Embrace white clouds, enjoy before you die
Fly to the peaks of mountains where ice is very nice

* * *
We toil so hard ,days go without return
Really you're now free but you will be slave
And you're vivid too but you'll soon burn
We're stray in a wide sea , like dolls in a violent wave

* * *
Days go ; days come , live merrily don't mind
The happiness will vanish , the sorrow will reign
Sooner or later we'll die and leave the pleasure behind
Want you waste happy times?! I think you're insane


* * *

old poem...i now remember it
our life is like a night mare
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