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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:48 am

always sad poems
why????
i don`t know
we have to live our life freely

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:17 pm

sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 8:05 pm

farah wrote:always sad poems
why????
i don`t know


what can i do?
it's my style and i hope i can change it but it's imposible
anyway thankx

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweethuman » Tue Jun 07, 2011 7:44 am

I liked the tilte alot ( FLY TO PARADISE). Tnx

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:23 am

hello
thnx alot my friend
i hope we can b friends
have lovely times u and all the readers

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweethuman » Wed Jun 15, 2011 7:11 am

Thanks dear Shakespear,

I really like & appreciate your friendly behavior and nice comments with all the EC members. Be Happy. :-) Yes, we can be friends. :-)

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Wed Jun 15, 2011 6:25 pm

hi sweethuman how are u ?

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 15, 2011 9:41 pm

hi sweet how r u?
nice 2 meet u...................

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Thu Jun 16, 2011 4:26 am

nice to meet u too here after lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng time

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweethuman » Thu Jun 16, 2011 6:01 am

shakespear wrote:hi sweet how r u?
nice 2 meet u...................


Assalam-O-Alaikum Dear,

انا بخیر. کیف انتا؟ {-: .

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:03 am

hi friend
where r u from sweethuman?
nice 2 meet u here
have nice moments
do u speak arabic really?

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweethuman » Thu Jun 16, 2011 9:17 am

shakespear wrote:hi friend
where r u from sweethuman?
nice 2 meet u here
have nice moments
do u speak arabic really?


Salam,
Im from the Islamic republic of Afghanistan.
Same here.
Same to you as well.
No, I cant speak arabic, I just know some words. :-P :lol:

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:01 pm

well i'm ok

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:48 pm

hi sweets wr r u???
sorry i can't reach my yahoo msg
have gd luck in ur new job
tell me all ur news
c u

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:41 am

hi friends
nice moments

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:40 am

shakespear wrote:FLY TO THE PARADISE

O bird ! spread both of wings in the sky
Fly with the breeze, fly far to the paradise
Embrace white clouds, enjoy before you die
Fly to the peaks of mountains where ice is very nice

* * *
We toil so hard ,days go without return
Really you're now free but you will be slave
And you're vivid too but you'll soon burn
We're stray in a wide sea , like dolls in a violent wave

* * *
Days go ; days come , live merrily don't mind
The happiness will vanish , the sorrow will reign
Sooner or later we'll die and leave the pleasure behind
Want you waste happy times?! I think you're insane


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old poem...i now remember it
our life is like a night mare


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