a place called GAZA

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a place called GAZA

Postby sweets » Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:41 am

I want to tell the world


I want to tell the world
A story


About a home With a broken lantern

And a burnt doll


About a picnic That wasn't enjoyed


About an axe That killed a tulip



A story about a fire That consumed a plait


a story about a tear that couldn't run down



I want to tell a story About a goat That wasn't milked



About a mother's dough That wasn't baked



About a wedding That wasn't celebrated



And a baby girl that didn't grow up



About a football That wasn't kicked


About a dove That didn't fly

I want to tell a story About a key That wasn't used



About a classroom That wasn't attended





About a playground That was silenced




About a book That wasn't read



About a besieged lonely farm
And about its fruits That weren't picked



About a lie that wasn't discovered




A story about a church That's no longer prayed in




And a mosque That no longer stands




And a culture No longer rejoiced




I want to tell a story About a muddy grassy roof



About a stone That faced a tank




And about a stubborn flag That refuses to lie down




About a spirit that cannot be defeated



I want to tell the world A story



Now Light a little candle for Palestine


You can do it


Light a candle One little candle
Watch the darkness fade away

Just try it out

One ray of light
Wipes away the gloomiest
Jet-black nights
As the dawn breaks

Just observe

Can you see that
All the might of darkness
In the world
Cannot extinguish
The faintest flicker
Of a beam of light

Light a candle
One little candle
Watch the darkness fade away

You can do it


Hey.. WORLD

Did you hear me?
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby Psixochka » Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:24 pm

i'm first :) honestly i was shocked after reading your poem... i like it very much!!! i even can't find words... it is a great job :)))
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby shakespear » Thu Jan 29, 2009 7:47 am

hi sweet
hi every one
i think u did this poem alively koz u lived and u r still living the bad events of Gaza.
i pray God 2 help u and all people in Gaza.
u took photos of Gaza lots of photos and each of them is considered as a seperate poem.
really u r a poetess.
and i can run with u at this poem.
go a head.
gd luck without bye but c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby sweets » Mon Feb 02, 2009 4:29 pm

hello everybody
and thanks for whome support me well and pray for us

Psixochka thanks for ur words i really felt with ur honest feeling



shakespear we are at same boat aren't we what we have to do this is Allah welling

see u all
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:45 pm

hi
yes we`re all in the same position
don`t worry about it and God will help us
c u and gd luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby sweethuman » Tue Feb 28, 2012 5:28 am

Good job. Wishing Palastine success.

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby sweets » Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:44 pm

thank you

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby muruganji » Sun Mar 04, 2012 6:36 pm

Dear every human beings aganist Palestine

and members in this forum

I beg all of you to read and spread it in facebook, twitter and ...etc.

This innocent young lady on the behalf her mother, father, elderbrother, younger brother, elder sister, younger sister each and everything of Palestine land creating a light and through that explain everything in that country. is it necessary to her? All are coming into her pure love.

Can you understand who all of you against Palestine?

every country has females and children.

That particular human beings can think and understand, we are divided by the world Politics and there is nothing for pure love of human being.

We should all together against the sins

Hi, female, hi children in every country do you like to be happy and feel the victory against the enemy country if you consider as it against in the weeping from children, females in the enemy country as you considered.is it necessary that victory you want?

Be thing everybody,

anymore war should not come until the world has even single woman or children

drop the weapons against love.

Love is coming through females like mother, sister, sister in law, apart from any religion.

If you feel the love, avoid the war for any politics.

every female should be respectable, when we respect the females, we have love, the love becomes and create through females and the love teached, teaching, and will be teaching only by the females and we can understand from the past and through the nature.

So everybody should stand against the war, the war should not come until a single female or child living in any part of the world

murugan

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby sweets » Sun Mar 04, 2012 9:09 pm

hi broth
thanks for these firing words but war was ended 3 years ago

check the date but nowadays we stay almost 12 hours without electricity can u imagine that !!!!!!!!

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby Vega » Tue Mar 27, 2012 4:23 pm

Hi Sweets,
Is the wall (a fence) between Israel and Gaza still there? Has it not been demolished yet?

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby sweets » Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:56 pm

yeah it's still here just shrinking us

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Re: a place called GAZA

Postby shakespear » Sat Apr 07, 2012 6:59 pm

hellooooooooooooo....its high cry from my deeps to make the sleeping ppl hear those children in syria and their mothers...their fathers crying...weeping...screaming...
when we'll take care 4 them...they r killed everyday...


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