AN ODE TO ????????????????

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AN ODE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:06 pm

too far .......................so close this my feeling foward you
to have more or stop it's a diffecult choice


first let me smell you oh my god
then have a kiss form you oh lallalallala
and finally have you all too smoothy full of passion and love


too close ............................. so far

now everything is finnished you finnished i finished no omre of you no more of me till i have anther peice of you or expect more of you


( now can you guess this odde to whome ??????????????????????????????????? )

share me your imaginatoin {-: {-:

cheeeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:29 am

hello
i think its gd poem and can`t guess whom this poem to .first i thought its for ur lover, but it looks like a riddle.
plz tell me whom to.
i`m waiting 4 the answer.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:10 am

oh shki ur here {-:

well i can not tell who cuz. i don't see much replies :cry: :cry: is there no imaginatoin here or what :-| :-|
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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:50 am

sweets wrote:too far .......................so close this my feeling foward you
to have more or stop it's a diffecult choice


first let me smell you oh my god
then have a kiss form you oh lallalallala
and finally have you all too smoothy full of passion and love


too close ............................. so far

now everything is finnished you finnished i finished no omre of you no more of me till i have anther peice of you or expect more of you


( now can you guess this odde to whome ??????????????????????????????????? )

share me your imaginatoin {-: {-:

cheeeeeeeeeeeeers


I'll guess for whom is that poem.

I think you wrote that for "shakespear". Am I correct sweets?
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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:58 pm

NO YOU ARE NOT DEAR {-:
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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:56 pm

sweets wrote:NO YOU ARE NOT DEAR {-:


So then I have no idea. :-)

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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Fri Mar 06, 2009 10:10 am

well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you

when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte :lol: :lol: iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one :-D
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Postby Psixochka » Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:05 am

hi
it is a good poem, but i am shocked that it is adressed to the piece of the chocolate :lol:
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby Krisi » Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:13 pm

sweets wrote:well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you

when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte :lol: :lol: iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one :-D


only one? :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Sat Mar 07, 2009 4:18 pm

Psixochka wrote:hi
it is a good poem, but i am shocked that it is adressed to the piece of the chocolate :lol:


do you belive this but it deserve this {-:


Krisi wrote:
sweets wrote:well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you

when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte :lol: :lol: iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one :-D


only one? :lol: :lol: :lol:


is it too much :roll:
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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby asdfghjkl » Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:20 pm

nice words from a nice mind

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Postby sweets » Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:06 am

thank you asdfghjkl
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Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:31 pm

hi sweet
hi every one who can believe u flirt a piece of chocolate.
its a joke :lol: but the words seem to be good why did not u send it to and u can consider me as that piece of chocolate koz i and that piece r similar.
c u and gd luck 4 all
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Re: AN ODDE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:03 pm

hi
nice to see you again {-:

as i said before it's for chocolate not for any one :evil:
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Re: AN ODE TO ????????????????

Postby shakespear » Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:32 pm

hi sweet
nice to meet u again... i said why did not u send it to me and consider me as that candy, koz the word and the flirt is high and lovely and i wish to be that piece of choclate.
plz tell me what is ur news? i wanna know about u
i`m waiting 4 ur news.
c u soon
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Re: AN ODE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:09 pm

hi
well iam writing somethig about dancing iam sure you will like it :-D
about me iam not ok too busy and lost (iam working since toady beside my study and so on) and really missing to talk with you

see you
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Re: AN ODE TO ????????????????

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 14, 2009 9:33 am

hi
i`m longing to c ur dacing poem
i hope u`ll be well at future
miss ur comments
c u
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Re: AN ODE TO ????????????????

Postby MONEM » Tue Apr 14, 2009 9:41 am

Hahahahha I don't want to do this with chocolates :lol:
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)

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Re: AN ODE TO ????????????????

Postby sweets » Tue Apr 14, 2009 2:08 pm

MONEM
nice to see around


shakespear

i neec some help iam losing my inspiration }: }: i do not know what's going on with me
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