IT IS MY HEART

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:43 pm

shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED


i can't complete it so i ask u to help me completing
thnx

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:19 pm

hi i wish i didn't issue this poem but its now part of me , of my personality.. so its ok..
i couldn't end it, i don't know why?

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby manal » Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:24 pm

hi....
i am not surprizing what i feel now........it is a poem of SHAKESPEARE...
be as slow as u like friend...we r Eagerly waiting.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby muruganji » Sat Jul 09, 2011 6:45 pm

Dear Shakes,

The real love never fails

Why i call shakes when others are calling you shaki, because, You can shake her mind when you are in true

Be confident, your vibration can change when it is true

I wished to advice to Both of you don't try to play with each other

I can assure about her like she is a pure water, innocent, her heart is beautiful, so she is definately beautiful.If you going to cheat her, God will punish and you will feel it.

Murugan

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:40 am

I dont want to add anything to it Shakespear, It is all about your feelings so I am waiting for your comments and opinions.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby muruganji » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:05 pm

Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:06 am

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan



Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:05 pm

sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan


Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:



[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sun Jul 17, 2011 10:01 pm

hi sweets
thnx 4 ur interest
have nice moments

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:09 am

sweets wrote:
sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan


Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:



[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:04 pm

[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:[/quote][/quote]

sweethuman
i do not mind to express ur ideas i respcet that but i think that everybody have the right of privacy
that's all

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Tue Jul 19, 2011 5:04 am

sweets wrote:[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:[/quote][/quote]

sweethuman
i do not mind to express ur ideas i respcet that but i think that everybody have the right of privacy
that's all[/quote]

Fine. that is your own opinion.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Tue Jul 19, 2011 10:10 pm

hello every one here
we don't have 2 b angry and plz every try 2 4get the past and try new day, don't seek the right or the false , just 4get all and try another topic and i hope we'll b loyal friends and like each other
thanks and i hope nice moments 4 all my friends here and there

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Wed Jul 20, 2011 5:27 am

Thanks Shakes, :-) There is no smilie for the HUG or else I would have posted that as well :-P

Thanks for the nice comments. Be Happy

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:33 am

hi sweethuman
thnx 4 ur soft msg and i hope 2 hear from u creative writings , i wana hear ur new poems
have nice moments and gdluck

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Wed Jul 20, 2011 10:17 am

Dear Shakes,
Only upon your request, Read my post there in Creating Writing by the title (Love your Mom first and always). I hope you like it.

Thanks.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sun Jul 24, 2011 11:08 pm

dear friend
i've read ur poem and i think its so lovely and full of expressions
hope good luck and have lovely moments

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Mon Jul 25, 2011 4:11 am

hi shak
why u did not answer my pm ??????

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:33 pm

hello
nice 2 meet u here and there
ramadan kareem
have nice moments in ramadan and i hope god forgives our sins
c u

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Mon Aug 01, 2011 7:17 pm

Allah akram dear
may Allah accsept ur prays and fast & forget our sins

takecare

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 03, 2011 8:54 am

hi
thnx 4 that
c u


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