DON`T BLAME ME

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shokin » Thu May 14, 2009 6:37 pm

This poem is not to blame !
It's not a shame !
We remember your name !
It's only a great fame !



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Nous sommes libres. Wir sind frei. We are free. Somos libres. Siamo liberi.

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Fri May 15, 2009 4:17 pm

jajajajajaj
hello shokin
long time ago we didn't meet so i'm very happy 2 meet u again
i think u comment on my poem with poem
its gd idea
thnx
c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shokin » Fri May 15, 2009 11:09 pm

Actually I blame you because of your sms language. :mrgreen:

shakespear wrote:jajajajajaj
hello shokin
long time ago we didn't meet so i'm very happy 2 meet u again
i think u comment on my poem with poem
its gd idea
thnx
c u


:lol: The real Shakespeare would not be proud of you. :lol:



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Nous sommes libres. Wir sind frei. We are free. Somos libres. Siamo liberi.

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sun May 17, 2009 8:36 am

hi
i'm so sorry and i thank you on this note but trust me i used to use this writing and i wish to leave this custom.sorry again and forgive my fault.
c u {-:
our life is like a night mare

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby Psixochka » Sun May 17, 2009 1:06 pm

Hi, Shakespear!!!

I think your poem is really great!!! And I like it very much!!!
Especially I like the third part of the poem :-)

Good luck
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Mon May 18, 2009 4:49 pm

thnx my friend and really u encoraged me and i like to meet u more in the future.good luck and thnx
our life is like a night mare

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby justme » Tue May 19, 2009 8:06 am

shakespear wrote:DON`T BLAME ME
I can feel you through this far distance
And can sense your soul sing and dance
Eve had tempted Adam to eat the forbidden apple
And you`re now blaming his spoiled sample
I`m like my ancestor full of lust
And always long to the lovely bust

Tears like pearls rose at your eyes
I couldn`t stand seeing them I became unwise
Your hand severely squeezed my heart
It`s your haunt, my valuable part
It holds your love, your name, your features
And you’ve thought you`re one of the weakest creatures…
When your tears rose at your eyes
But I saw them and became unwise

Truly I came from unknown time, unknown place
Like a damned ghost, I couldn`t show my face
I`m mere a name, a word, and may be a lie
And I know I gave you a painful sigh
I`ve tasted the pleasure like sea foam
But I`ve known pain engraved as doom -home
Don`t you know you`re my original substance?
And I’m now living with you lovely romance
So don`t mention Elena, Barbara or the other
And let`s forget, I think that`ll be better
Un-weak… although pearls dropped on that florid rose
Your hand squeezed my heart and made it pose

From the beginning I`ve said I’m worse than the devil
You`ve also had your own lust and needed me to fill
So you`ve quickly wide opened your door
And invited me to enter..I`m the moor
Why did u ever pick up libido -seed?
And planted it to satisfy your need?
You are like me, yield to your longing part
So don`t blame me, I have my soft heart

hi !
i just read your poem , you are good poet , i like your poetry style but i want mantion here that some time girls will be right but men can't understand her !
its just my opinion no arguments well best of luck here i am new so i would like that u feel dont mind ...
keep sharing with us !
Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness.

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:01 pm

hello
even u r new its ok koz we r all equall and there is no diffirence among us. u r welcome any time , anywhere.
i like to be ur friend
thnx
our life is like a night mare

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:08 am

oh
good poem but i think you are ladies'man (Don juan) koz u mention many women
i like it
c u
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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:27 am

hello
do u like to be one of them?
i'm waiting ur reply
c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby MARI » Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:19 pm

you are a gooood poet .....i think that your soil in wrting poems ...

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 13, 2009 1:30 pm

hello
thnx u seem very kind and really u encouraged me and i like to be ur friends and always hear ur comments.
c u and gd luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:23 pm

hello friends

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:28 pm

hello Mari
i added u so plz contact me
c u

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby manal » Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:30 pm

hi...here is an announcement......
when u r sad,depressed,,,or even feel unwell....
all what u need is,,,to read a poem for our great shakespeare....
what is ur new friend?

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Tue Jul 12, 2011 4:29 am

hello friends
really i feel sad and melancholic , i feel alone......
its mixture of sad feelings ....when we feel sad our feelings will flow and appear even if we don't wana show they will appear on our face...so is our love when u love someone and u wana hide it u can't koz it'll appear on ur face and will appear in ur speech , in ur feelings, in ur treatment with that person . may be i'm wrong in this opinion but this is what i feel
thnx a lot 4 enduring me

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby sweets » Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:16 pm

shakespear wrote:hello friends
really i feel sad and melancholic , i feel alone......
its mixture of sad feelings ....when we feel sad our feelings will flow and appear even if we don't wana show they will appear on our face...so is our love when u love someone and u wana hide it u can't koz it'll appear on ur face and will appear in ur speech , in ur feelings, in ur treatment with that person . may be i'm wrong in this opinion but this is what i feel
thnx a lot 4 enduring me



i know this mixture of feelings but wht we have to do it's our destiny it's like "so far too close "i'm sure u'll have a happy surprize soooooooooooooooooooooooon cheer up

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Sun Jul 17, 2011 10:15 pm

hello
i'm waiting the surprise 4 long time even b4 i came to this world but its fantom, mirage...i hope one can make me happy and pull me from sadness , give me pleasur
thnx alot

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby farah » Wed Aug 10, 2011 8:46 am

FANTASTI
:-D
:-D :!!: :!!: :!!:

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:30 am

u r so nice...thnx

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Re: DON`T BLAME ME

Postby Lara » Fri Sep 09, 2011 1:26 am

SHakespear! Hi, it's a great poem, ur poems are always great, i think u r tired of hearing this hahah.
Well, i will tell u what i think; hmm as woman we dont like to know that there is anyone else in a relationship, so anygirl would say the same, we wanna be the only one for a guy. And it's common a guy complains about that, and then feels his girls is blaming him.
I hope u understand my point of view friend!! c u :)


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