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Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:59 am
by farah
why u can not???????
you seem you love her??

Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:06 pm
by shakespear
hello
its private affairs
if u wanna know her name i have to ask her to accept that
c u

Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:52 pm
by farah
how long do i have to wait .
plz tell me directly
bye

Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:04 am
by shakespear
hola
i can't tell u and u don't need to wait for that
if u wanna ask me about the poem and the style and the ideas
ok??
have nice moments
gd luck

Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:03 am
by farah
thnankx
plz i want you to teach me some thing about poetry
thankx

Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:42 am
by shakespear
hola
yea anytime
be careful
bye and gdluck

Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:30 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:hello
i hope so koz u r like firebrand, ember under ashes needs blow of air to blaze so i'm the blow of air,u have to blaze and burn so plz show us ur pearls, ur lovely poems,
i have new poem , and ill issue it later if God permit.
c u and gd luck
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Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:29 pm
by shakespear
this is my poem:

Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?


this poem has a connection with the last poem " we know" there is similarity between them

Re: i won't ask you

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:36 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:
Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?
this poem is a reply to one of my dearest friends...not long