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do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:53 am
by sweets
since trust is hrad
since love is rare
since life is action
since iam here
you are there
isee
isaw
i hear
i heared
with she
with here
everyday
where shall i catch you with she with here
only what i have are talks
tell me shall i belive that iam in ur heart ?????
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:04 pm
by Psixochka
Hi,
Your poem is nice as usually
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:07 pm
by shakespear
hi sweet and thnx
i sent my comment in advance
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:01 pm
by sweets
Psixochka thanx twice for ur words and to be the first
shakespear wating for next comment
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 10:08 am
by shakespear
hi sweet
i was the 1st to send u the comment
correct this information koz i sent it on ur inbox
c u
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 10:16 am
by Psixochka
You're willcome ^_^
I like all your poetry, cuz it has true-life substance, it is plain and easy to understand
Thanks that you post your poetry here
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:19 am
by Najwa
Hi sweet
in my point of view this poem is soo nice and full of feelings
really .. i like it
thanx lot
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:34 pm
by justme
Nice Sharing
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:07 am
by sweets
thank you so much Najwa and just me
i hope to read for you sooooooooooon
Re: do not balme me iF say NO
Posted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:02 am
by shakespear
"Sent: Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:35 am
by shakespear
hello
u r marvelous!
really u r surrealist koz u used dreamy imagination and u have wide look. i'm sorry if i issued ur message on the club and i ask u to issue ur comment at the club generally
i'm waiting ur reply
and i'll answer comment with a poem
c u and gd luck"
hello , this is my comment at ur inbox and u can see the date and time of sending so i was the first who sent u the comment , isn't it?
really u made me angry but ok koz harm from u is sweet
c u and have nice times