WITH OR WITHOUT

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shakespear
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Re: WITH OR WITHOUT

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:24 pm

hello
i think u r great so plz go ahead and don't fear to write , don't fear to make mistakes, i think u r bold
i'm waiting ur new poem
c u

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Re: WITH OR WITHOUT

Postby sweets » Tue Sep 28, 2010 3:51 pm

thanx for ur cheeeeeeeeeerings

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Re: WITH OR WITHOUT

Postby muruganji » Tue Oct 05, 2010 6:01 pm

Dear Sweets

One time when kannan asked baskar

How did you feel without sweets in your life?

Immediately he told
when we seeing the sky in the night, there are countless stars are sparkling.It is Okay.
But among stars if the full moon is not appearing there, when the sky is not looking beautiful.
samething when my sweets is not in my life, my life is not beautiful.

from the baskar's diary
Murugan

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Re: WITH OR WITHOUT

Postby sweets » Tue Oct 05, 2010 7:41 pm

hi
plz reply on my message

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Re: WITH OR WITHOUT

Postby Sunnypk » Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:14 am

Nice poem. Sweets :)

All the best for further writing.

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Re: WITH OR WITHOUT

Postby sweets » Wed Oct 06, 2010 6:41 pm

thanx for ur comment sunny

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Re: WITH OR WITHOUT

Postby Sunnypk » Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:22 am

sweets wrote:thanx for ur comment sunny


U welcome dear sweets


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